列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки, повторения и неясные формулировки. Работайте над правильным использованием времен (Present Simple), устранением повторов и улучшением связности. Сформулируйте главную мысль в первом предложении, затем добавьте одно–два конкретных пояснения с использованием связок (for example, however, because). Также замените неформальные выражения вроде «it makes me crazy» на более нейтральные, если цель — академическая речь.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list. It helps me concentrate on the items I really need, so I don’t buy unnecessary things. However, sometimes I forget the list at home, which is frustrating because I then have to rely on memory.

建議: Ответ короткий и запутанный из‑за повтора слов и неверного порядка слов. Улучшите структуру: начните с четкого заявления (Yes/No), затем объясните причину и приведите пример, используя связки (because, so, therefore). Уберите повторы и согласуйте предлоги (make a list for work, plan in my head).

範例: No, I usually don’t make a written list for work because I prefer to keep a mental plan. For example, I organise my tasks by priority in my head and check them off mentally as I finish them.

建議: Хорошая идея, но фразы расплывчаты и есть лексические ошибки («necessitate» неуместно). Избегайте чрезмерного использования «maybe» и повторов. Дайте 1–2 ясные причины с примерами и используйте подходящие слова (confident, memory, prefer spontaneity).

範例: I think some people avoid lists because they trust their memory or prefer to work spontaneously. For example, creative people might feel that a strict list limits their flexibility.

建議: Ответ ясный и содержит личное предпочтение, но есть грамматические неточности и разговорные слова. Улучшите связность, уберите ненужные слова и используйте корректную структуру (prefer to do something on my phone because…). Добавьте короткое конкретное обоснование.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it’s more convenient and I can edit them easily. For instance, I use a notes app that syncs with my other devices, so I never lose my list.

× Honestly I always use using a list during my shopping.

✓ Honestly I always use a list when I go shopping.

The error is using the gerund 'using' redundantly after 'use'. Replace 'using a list during my shopping' with 'use a list when I go shopping' for natural phrasing and correct verb form.

× It's it helps me to concentrate on certain items which is necessary to buy.

✓ It helps me concentrate on the items I need to buy.

Redundant 'It's it' and incorrect relative clause 'which is necessary to buy'. Simplify to 'It helps me concentrate on the items I need to buy' to correct structure and maintain meaning.

× But sometimes I can forget about list and it's make me it makes me crazy because I always forget what.

✓ But sometimes I forget the list and it drives me crazy because I always forget what I need.

Problems: 'can forget about list' needs article and verb form; 'it's make me it makes me' is redundant and incorrect verb agreement; sentence ends abruptly. Use 'forget the list', 'it drives me crazy' and complete the clause 'what I need'.

× I don't I don't make a list of during my work because I have another other focus on another items and I always make some plan in my head and I I don't feel necessity of making lists in this area.

✓ I don't make a list for my work because I focus on different things and I usually make a plan in my head, so I don't feel the need to make lists for work.

Repetitions ('I don't I don't', 'another other'), wrong preposition 'of during', plural errors 'another items', and unnatural phrase 'feel necessity'. Correct prepositions, remove repetitions, fix plural, and use 'the need'.

× In my opinion, maybe it's because they are pretty confident in their skills and they don't feel necessitate of using it it.

✓ In my opinion, maybe it's because they are quite confident in their skills and don't feel the need to use a list.

Incorrect noun 'necessitate' and redundant 'it it'. Use 'don't feel the need to' and 'use a list' for correct modal construction and idiomatic expression.

× Maybe they have a good memory and that's why this problem doesn't bother don't bother them.

✓ Maybe they have a good memory, and that's why this problem doesn't bother them.

Redundant verbs 'doesn't bother don't bother' must be reduced to a single correct present-tense negative 'doesn't bother' to match subject.

× If I'm going to make a note, of course I will use my phone because to use paper list, it's old fashioned.

✓ If I'm going to make a note, of course I will use my phone because using a paper list is old-fashioned.

Incorrect infinitive phrase 'to use paper list' and missing article. Use 'using a paper list' and hyphenate 'old-fashioned' for correct adjective form.

× Yeah, I would say modern lifestyle doesn't accept any this the paper, the paper list.

✓ Yeah, I would say modern lifestyles don't accept the paper list.

Awkward phrase 'modern lifestyle doesn't accept any this the paper, the paper list' has article and number issues. Use plural 'lifestyles' or 'modern life' and correct article 'the paper list' or 'paper lists' for clarity.