列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more direct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain who makes the list and why, and finish with your future intention.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. When I was a teenager, my mother prepared the list for shopping. Now, my wife makes the list before I go shopping so that I can buy everything properly. In the future, I hope to prepare the list myself to help with shopping.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs clearer sentence structure and better linking words. Try to avoid repetition and use more precise vocabulary. Also, keep your sentences concise and directly answer the question.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and saves time. By using a list, I can work more efficiently and avoid forgetting important tasks. Overall, it improves my productivity.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, explain the reasons more specifically.

範例: Some people do not like making lists because they prefer to memorize the tasks or items they need. They believe they can stay organized without writing things down. Therefore, they think making lists is unnecessary.

建議: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to show contrast between past and present. Also, finish your answer properly.

範例: When I was a student, my mother used to write shopping lists on paper. Now, my wife writes the list on paper but takes a photo and sends it to me via WhatsApp. I find this method very convenient and effective.

× my mother made at least for shopping

✓ my mother made at least a list for shopping

The original sentence is missing the object 'a list' after 'made at least'. The verb 'made' requires an object here to complete the meaning. Adding 'a list' clarifies what was made.

× now my wife prepare at least when I go to go for shopping

✓ now my wife prepares at least when I go shopping

The verb 'prepare' should be in third person singular form 'prepares' to agree with the singular subject 'my wife'. Also, 'go to go for shopping' is redundant; 'go shopping' is correct.

× I hope that in the future I will also contribute to prepare a list for shopping

✓ I hope that in the future I will also contribute to preparing a list for shopping

After 'contribute to', the verb should be in the gerund form 'preparing' rather than the base form 'prepare'.

× If I usually make a list from my work because it helps me to work in organizing way

✓ I usually make a list for my work because it helps me to work in an organized way

The phrase 'If I usually make' is incorrect; 'I usually make' is correct. Also, 'from my work' should be 'for my work'. 'In organizing way' should be 'in an organized way' to use the correct adjective form and article.

× and it also saves a lot of my time as so that I can work with more efficiently and without any hesitation

✓ and it also saves a lot of my time so that I can work more efficiently and without any hesitation

The phrase 'as so that' is incorrect; 'so that' is correct. 'With more efficiently' should be 'more efficiently' without 'with'.

× It also helped me to avoid forgetting anything and to stay more organized

✓ It also helps me to avoid forgetting anything and to stay more organized

The sentence is describing a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of past tense 'helped'.

× Some people may ignore of making list because they may be they may be memorize the items which is necessary for them

✓ Some people may ignore making lists because they may memorize the items which are necessary for them

The verb 'ignore' should be followed directly by the gerund without 'of'. 'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'They may be they may be' is redundant and should be 'they may'. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'items'.

× and they can do work in organizing way

✓ and they can work in an organized way

The phrase 'do work in organizing way' is incorrect. 'Work' is the verb here, and 'in an organized way' is the correct adverbial phrase. 'Do work' is unnecessary.

× So I believe for this reasons they do not like

✓ So I believe for these reasons they do not like it

'For this reasons' should be 'for these reasons' to agree in number. The sentence is incomplete without an object after 'do not like', so adding 'it' completes the meaning.

× when my mother prepared a list for shopping, he used to writing down it, uh, on paper

✓ when my mother prepared a list for shopping, she used to write it down on paper

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect for 'my mother'; it should be 'she'. 'Used to writing down it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'used to write it down'.

× But now my uh, when my, uh, wife, uh, make a list, he actually write down on paper

✓ But now, when my wife makes a list, she actually writes it down on paper

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with third person singular subject 'my wife'. The pronoun 'he' is incorrect; it should be 'she'. 'Write down' should be 'writes down' for subject-verb agreement.