列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并补充具体原因。避免重复和不必要的词汇。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I often forget what to buy if I don't write it down.

建議: 回答中有重复和犹豫词汇，建议使用更简洁的句子结构，明确表达观点，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and stay organized.

建議: 回答不够具体且有语法错误，建议明确表达观点，使用具体原因并避免口头语。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory or prefer to be spontaneous.

建議: 回答较为自然，但存在语法和表达不准确，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免口头语。

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I won't forget it when I go shopping.

× Yes, I always make a list when I will go to shop and why I make less because I always forget what should I buy or shop.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping and I make less because I always forget what I should buy.

句中使用了不正确的将来时态“when I will go to shop”，应使用一般现在时“when I go shopping”表示习惯动作。此外，“why I make less”表达不清，应改为“I make less”。“what should I buy or shop”中“shop”用法错误，应去掉。

× Yes, I always make a list when I will go to shop and why I make less because I always forget what should I buy or shop.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping and I make less because I always forget what I should buy.

间接疑问句中，助动词应放在主语之后，正确顺序是“what I should buy”，而不是“what should I buy”。

× Yes, I think I will make a list because I think if I make a list, uh, I know what should I first do and what should I second do.

✓ Yes, I think I will make a list because if I make a list, I know what I should do first and what I should do second.

“what should I first do”语序错误，间接疑问句中助动词应在主语之后，且“first”应放在动词后面。

× Yes, I think I will make a list because I think if I make a list, uh, I know what should I first do and what should I second do.

✓ Yes, I think I will make a list because if I make a list, I know what I should do first and what I should do second.

间接疑问句中助动词应放在主语之后，正确顺序是“what I should do first”，而不是“what should I first do”。

× I think some of people may be good at, uh, remember something, or some people, uh, will improvise to do something.

✓ I think some people may be good at remembering something, or some people will improvise to do something.

“some of people”应改为“some people”，因为“some of”后面应接特定的复数名词或代词。

× I think some of people may be good at, uh, remember something, or some people, uh, will improvise to do something.

✓ I think some people may be good at remembering something, or some people will improvise to do something.

介词“at”后应接动名词形式，故“good at remember”应改为“good at remembering”。

× I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient for me and I maybe forget, uh, take the paper when I go to the shop.

✓ I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient for me and I may forget to take the paper when I go to the shop.

“forget”后应接不定式“to take”，而不是直接接动词原形。