列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文法の誤りを直し、より自然な表現を使うことが重要です。また、回答は簡潔にし、冗長な部分を避けましょう。例えば、「I don't make a list when I shop because I usually buy online. It's convenient and I can stay at home without going to the store.」のようにすると良いです。

範例: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer buying online. It's convenient since I can browse on my phone and stay at home, which saves time and effort.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りを修正し、意味が明確になるようにしましょう。例えば、「I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. It works well for me, and my friends also make lists.」のように表現すると良いです。

範例: I always make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks. It makes organizing my day easier, and many of my friends do the same.

建議: 文法の誤りを直し、より自然で明確な表現を使いましょう。例えば、「Some people don't like making lists because it can be difficult and time-consuming. However, I don't mind it.」のようにすると良いです。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and can be challenging. However, I find it helpful and don't mind doing it.

建議: 文法と表現を改善し、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、「I prefer making lists on my phone because I can always check them easily, and I don't have to worry about losing paper lists.」のように表現すると良いです。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can access them anytime and they are less likely to get lost or damaged compared to paper lists.

× I don't make a list when I shopping because I usually buy something online shop it's only scroll on my phone and stay at home.

✓ I don't make a list when I am shopping because I usually buy something from an online shop; I just scroll on my phone and stay at home.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be used with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense ('I am shopping'). Also, 'online shop' should be 'online shop' with a preposition 'from' to indicate the source, and the sentence needs punctuation for clarity.

× I usually buy something online shop it's only scroll on my phone and stay at home.

✓ I usually buy something from an online shop; I just scroll on my phone and stay at home.

The phrase 'buy something online shop' is missing the preposition 'from' to indicate the source of purchase. Correct usage is 'buy something from an online shop.'

× I usually buy something online shop it's only scroll on my phone and stay at home.

✓ I usually buy something from an online shop; I just scroll on my phone and stay at home.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper conjunctions or punctuation. It should be split or connected properly for clarity.

× I don't have to go the store.

✓ I don't have to go to the store.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a destination. The correct phrase is 'go to the store.'

× I always make a list for my work because it can career my tasks at what I should do, so it's very comfortable for me to organize it my tasks and my friends always make a list too.

✓ I always make a list for my work because it can carry my tasks and show what I should do, so it's very comfortable for me to organize my tasks, and my friends always make a list too.

The word 'career' is incorrect here; it should be 'carry.' Also, 'at what I should do' is incorrect and should be rephrased to 'show what I should do.' The phrase 'organize it my tasks' is incorrect; it should be 'organize my tasks.'

× I always make a list for my work because it can career my tasks at what I should do, so it's very comfortable for me to organize it my tasks and my friends always make a list too.

✓ I always make a list for my work because it can carry my tasks and show what I should do, so it's very comfortable for me to organize my tasks, and my friends always make a list too.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used in 'at what I should do.' It should be omitted or replaced with 'show' to clarify meaning.

× So some people don't like make out list but for me it's very nothing to.

✓ So some people don't like to make lists, but for me, it's nothing at all.

The phrase 'make out list' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists.' Also, 'it's very nothing to' is ungrammatical and should be 'it's nothing at all.'

× So some people don't like make out list but for me it's very nothing to.

✓ So some people don't like to make lists, but for me, it's nothing at all.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists.

× So some people don't like make out list but for me it's very nothing to.

✓ So some people don't like to make lists, but for me, it's nothing at all.

The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to make' or 'making.' Here, 'to make' is appropriate.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error.

× It's because I always can see it and check my list and it can.

✓ It's because I can always see it and check my list, and it can.

The adverb 'always' should be placed after the modal verb 'can' for correct word order: 'can always see.' The sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete.

× It can break any anywhere.

✓ It can't break anywhere.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely that the list cannot be lost or broken anywhere, so 'It can't break anywhere' is clearer.