列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接表达购物前会写购物清单，并说明原因。

範例: Yes, I usually write a small shopping list on a card before I go to the supermarket because it helps me remember what I need to buy.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，清晰说明制作工作清单的频率和效果。

範例: Yes, I like to make a weekly work plan because it helps me know what tasks I need to complete and their deadlines. As a result, my work becomes more efficient.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议用更准确的词汇和句式表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer spontaneity and enjoy challenges, so they don't like having everything planned out.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁。建议直接说明喜欢用纸质笔记本记录计划，并说明原因。

範例: I prefer to write my lists on paper because I have a notebook for work plans, which helps me remember my tasks over several days.

× I enjoy to make a plan every week on the list because it can help me which work I need to do and the deadline and the deadline.

✓ I enjoy making a plan every week on the list because it can help me know which work I need to do and the deadline.

动词 enjoy 后面应该接动名词（-ing 形式），而不是不定式 to do。这里应使用 making 而不是 to make。

× I always write a small card in my pocket one eye before I go to super go to buy things because it can help me to remember what I really want, want and.

✓ I always write a small card in my pocket one day before I go to the supermarket to buy things because it can help me remember what I really want.

短语中 'one eye before' 应为 'one day before'，'go to super' 应为 'go to the supermarket'，且 'help me to remember' 中 'to' 可省略。

× I like to write a list in the paper because I have a notebook which is used to record the plan in the work because it helps me can remember what I needed to do and after after a few days.

✓ I like to write a list on paper because I have a notebook which is used to record the plan at work because it helps me remember what I need to do after a few days.

介词 'in the paper' 应为 'on paper'，'in the work' 应为 'at work'，'helps me can remember' 结构错误，应为 'helps me remember'。

× Since I have the list, my work become more efficient.

✓ Since I have the list, my work has become more efficient.

句子中描述从过去到现在的变化，应该使用现在完成时 'has become'，而不是一般现在时 'become'。

× I think maybe they don't like the feeling which everything was planned, they like to something accident and a challenge, so they didn't like to make a list.

✓ I think maybe they don't like the feeling that everything is planned; they like something accidental and challenging, so they don't like to make a list.

关系代词 'which' 应改为 'that'，时态应保持一致，'like to something accident' 结构错误，应为 'like something accidental'，'didn't like' 应与前文时态一致改为 'don't like'。