列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like 'for before going shopping' and 'or whatever'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me buy groceries more conveniently and ensures I don't forget anything important for my home.

建議: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good use of examples and linking words. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repeating simple words like 'list' multiple times.

範例: Yes, I often prepare a task list for work as it keeps me organized and focused. For example, prioritizing tasks enables me to manage my time effectively and prevents me from overlooking important responsibilities. Consequently, this practice significantly boosts my productivity.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find writing tedious and prefer to remember tasks mentally. Additionally, they might feel that lists are unnecessary or time-consuming.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your points more clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: I always prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to update. For instance, if I forget to add an item, I can quickly include it. Also, unlike paper lists, I don't have to worry about losing my phone.

× Yes, obviously I will make a list for before going shopping because that will be more convenient for buying groceries or whatever because it's helpful for what we need for our home.

✓ Yes, obviously I make a list before going shopping because that is more convenient for buying groceries or whatever since it's helpful for what we need for our home.

The use of 'will' here is incorrect as the sentence describes a habitual action, not a future event. Modal verb 'will' is used for future intentions or promises, but for habits, the simple present tense is appropriate. Hence, 'I will make' should be 'I make'.

× Yes, obviously I will make a list for before going shopping because that will be more convenient for buying groceries or whatever because it's helpful for what we need for our home.

✓ Yes, obviously I make a list before going shopping because that is more convenient for buying groceries or whatever since it's helpful for what we need for our home.

The phrase 'for before going shopping' is incorrect. The preposition 'for' is unnecessary before 'before going shopping'. The correct phrase is simply 'before going shopping'.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of my work because it helps me stay organized and focused.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used with 'make a list'. The correct preposition is 'of' when referring to the content of the list. So, 'make a list for my work' should be 'make a list of my work'.

× In my perspective people don't like making list is they are not able to like to writing and also they keep in mind the list.

✓ In my perspective, people don't like making lists because they are not able to write and also keep the list in mind.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general activity of making lists. Also, the phrase 'like to writing' is incorrect; it should be 'able to write'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× In my perspective people don't like making list is they are not able to like to writing and also they keep in mind the list.

✓ In my perspective, people don't like making lists because they are not able to write and also keep the list in mind.

The original sentence has poor structure and unclear meaning. The phrase 'is they are not able to like to writing' is incorrect and confusing. It should be restructured to 'because they are not able to write' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer always to make a list on my phone because that's more convenient and easy method for me if I'm forgetting or left any product I can add or also.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on my phone because that's a more convenient and easy method for me; if I forget or leave out any product, I can add it later.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the main verb 'prefer' for correct emphasis. Also, the sentence has awkward phrasing and missing articles; 'more convenient and easy method' should be 'a more convenient and easy method'. The phrase 'if I'm forgetting or left any product' is incorrect and should be 'if I forget or leave out any product'.

× Moreover we didn't left the page anywhere or we we couldn't miss that if we put in the phone.

✓ Moreover, we don't lose the page anywhere and we can't miss it if we put it in the phone.

The phrase 'didn't left' is incorrect; the past tense 'left' should not be used with 'didn't'. Also, 'put in the phone' should be 'put it in the phone'. The sentence is better expressed in present tense to match the context. The phrase 'we couldn't miss that' is better as 'we can't miss it'.