列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีความยาวเกินไปและมีการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน รวมถึงคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น "uh" ควรตอบให้กระชับและชัดเจนมากขึ้น และใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ tense ที่เหมาะสมและคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remember the items I need. Without a list, I often forget important things.

建議: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น "because" หรือ "so" และควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น "prioritize" แทน "priority" และปรับประโยคให้ถูกต้องตามหลักไวยากรณ์

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and remember important things to complete by the end of the day.

建議: คำตอบมีความไม่ชัดเจนและใช้คำพูดซ้ำซ้อนมาก ควรตอบให้ตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม และหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they can remember tasks easily and feel that making lists wastes their time.

建議: คำตอบควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม เช่น "because" และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน เช่น "make making me remember" ควรปรับให้ประโยคกระชับและชัดเจน

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better than using my phone.

× I usually do at least to, to, to record my requirement to the shop because if I not do the list, uh, I will forget and, uh, missing some, uh, important thing to, to shopping.

✓ I usually make at least a list to record my requirements for shopping because if I don't make the list, I will forget and miss some important things when shopping.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'do' instead of 'make' for 'make a list', and 'missing' should be 'miss' to match the modal 'will'. Also, 'to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'when shopping' or 'for shopping'. The verb form after modal verbs should be base form, not -ing form.

× I usually do at least to, to, to record my requirement to the shop because if I not do the list, uh, I will forget and, uh, missing some, uh, important thing to, to shopping.

✓ I usually make at least a list to record my requirements for shopping because if I don't make the list, I will forget and miss some important things when shopping.

The word 'requirement' should be plural 'requirements' because it refers to multiple items. Similarly, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.

× I usually do at least to, to, to record my requirement to the shop because if I not do the list, uh, I will forget and, uh, missing some, uh, important thing to, to shopping.

✓ I usually make at least a list to record my requirements for shopping because if I don't make the list, I will forget and miss some important things when shopping.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'requirement' and 'shopping'. The correct prepositions are 'for' shopping and 'when' shopping to indicate purpose and time.

× I usually do at least to, to, to record my requirement to the shop because if I not do the list, uh, I will forget and, uh, missing some, uh, important thing to, to shopping.

✓ I usually make at least a list to record my requirements for shopping because if I don't make the list, I will forget and miss some important things when shopping.

The modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'miss', not the -ing form 'missing'. Also, 'if I not do' should be 'if I don't make' to correctly form the negative conditional.

× Yes I do, at least for my work I list everything priority to complete end of the day and it is work a lot and help me a lot to remember what to do important one.

✓ Yes, I do. At least for my work, I list everything by priority to complete by the end of the day, and it works a lot and helps me a lot to remember what important things to do.

'Everything priority' should be 'everything by priority' or 'everything in order of priority'. 'It is work' should be 'it works' to agree with singular subject. 'Important one' should be 'important things' to match plural context.

× Yes I do, at least for my work I list everything priority to complete end of the day and it is work a lot and help me a lot to remember what to do important one.

✓ Yes, I do. At least for my work, I list everything by priority to complete by the end of the day, and it works a lot and helps me a lot to remember what important things to do.

The verbs 'work' and 'help' need to be in third person singular form 'works' and 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes I do, at least for my work I list everything priority to complete end of the day and it is work a lot and help me a lot to remember what to do important one.

✓ Yes, I do. At least for my work, I list everything by priority to complete by the end of the day, and it works a lot and helps me a lot to remember what important things to do.

The phrase 'priority to complete end of the day' is missing prepositions. It should be 'by priority' and 'by the end of the day' to be grammatically correct.

× In my opinion, uh, I think uh, they, they can remember by, uh, by themselves, they can complete in uh, one day, uh, there is, uh, can be saving, uh, them time to, to not do the necessary.

✓ In my opinion, I think they can remember by themselves and complete in one day. It can save them time by not doing unnecessary things.

'There is, uh, can be saving' is incorrect and unclear. 'Them time' should be 'their time'. 'Not do the necessary' should be 'not doing unnecessary things'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct plural forms.

× In my opinion, uh, I think uh, they, they can remember by, uh, by themselves, they can complete in uh, one day, uh, there is, uh, can be saving, uh, them time to, to not do the necessary.

✓ In my opinion, I think they can remember by themselves and complete in one day. It can save them time by not doing unnecessary things.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used instead of 'their' to indicate possession. Also, the sentence structure makes pronoun reference unclear.

× In my opinion, uh, I think uh, they, they can remember by, uh, by themselves, they can complete in uh, one day, uh, there is, uh, can be saving, uh, them time to, to not do the necessary.

✓ In my opinion, I think they can remember by themselves and complete in one day. It can save them time by not doing unnecessary things.

The phrase 'to, to not do the necessary' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'by' followed by the gerund 'not doing' to express the means of saving time.

× I prefer to do a list in my paper, my book instead my phone because my paper I can write down and when I write down I will remember directly.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my paper, my book instead of my phone because with paper I can write down, and when I write, I will remember directly.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to writing on paper. 'Instead my phone' should be 'instead of my phone'. Also, 'my paper' is better as 'with paper' for clarity.

× So make making me remember.

✓ So it helps me remember.

The phrase 'make making me remember' is incorrect. The verb 'make' should be followed by the base form 'make me remember' or better rephrased as 'it helps me remember' for clarity and correctness.