列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your sentences shorter and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me buy everything at once. Otherwise, I have to go back to the market, which is tiring."

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me buy everything at once. Otherwise, I have to go back to the market, which is tiring.

建議: Your answer has good content but the sentence structure is confusing and some grammar mistakes are present. Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and use linking words like "first," "then," or "also" to make it coherent. For example, "As a student, I make a list before studying. First, I decide which subjects to study, then I allocate time for each subject, and also choose the topics to focus on."

範例: As a student, I make a list before studying. First, I decide which subjects to study, then I allocate time for each subject, and also choose the topics to focus on.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar errors and lacks linking words. Try to use linking words like "because" or "maybe" properly and avoid repetition. For example, "I'm not sure, but maybe some people think making lists is time-consuming or a waste of time. Also, they might not have the habit of making lists."

範例: I'm not sure, but maybe some people think making lists is time-consuming or a waste of time. Also, they might not have the habit of making lists.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but some sentences are unclear and repetitive. Try to use linking words like "because" and avoid repeating words. Also, check grammar for subject-verb agreement. For example, "I prefer to make a list on paper because I avoid using my phone while studying. I keep my phone in another room to concentrate better, as having it nearby reduces my focus and wastes time."

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because I avoid using my phone while studying. I keep my phone in another room to concentrate better, as having it nearby reduces my focus and wastes time.

× Yes, every time I go for shopping I try to make a list before going to shopping because it helps me to buy everything at once and since it's very tiring to go to the shopping so if I forget one thing it it's really feel disturbed to go to the market again.

✓ Yes, every time I go shopping I try to make a list before going shopping because it helps me buy everything at once and since it's very tiring to go shopping, if I forget one thing, it really feels disturbing to go to the market again.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' because 'shopping' is used as a verb here. Also, 'going to shopping' should be 'going shopping'. Additionally, 'it it's really feel disturbed' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it really feels disturbing' to match subject-verb agreement and correct adjective use.

× As a student, and yes, I do make a list before starting my study. When I sit to study, I make a list of the subject, which subjects I'm gonna do today and what time it will I'm gonna take for one subject and also what type of topic or what kind of kinds of topic I'm going, I'm gonna read today.

✓ As a student, yes, I do make a list before starting my study. When I sit to study, I make a list of the subjects I'm going to do today, how much time I will take for each subject, and also what type of topic or what kinds of topics I'm going to read today.

The phrase 'I'm gonna do' should be 'I'm going to do' for formal correctness. 'What time it will I'm gonna take' is incorrect; it should be 'how much time I will take'. 'What kind of kinds of topic' is redundant; use either 'what kind of topic' or 'what kinds of topics'. Also, 'I'm going, I'm gonna read' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm going to read'.

× I'm not sure actually, but I guess some people think that making this is time consuming. They maybe think that it's time of waste or they don't like it or they don't have have the habit to make a list.

✓ I'm not sure actually, but I guess some people think that making lists is time-consuming. They may think that it's a waste of time, or they don't like it, or they don't have the habit of making a list.

'Making this' is unclear; it should be 'making lists'. 'Time of waste' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a waste of time'. 'Have have' is a repetition error. Also, 'have the habit to make' should be 'have the habit of making' because 'habit' is followed by 'of' and a gerund.

× I prefer to make a list on my paper because when I start my study I try to avoid my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I start my study, I try to avoid my phone.

The phrase 'on my paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper' when referring to writing lists or notes. 'My paper' implies a specific paper belonging to the speaker, which is not intended here.

× If I study at 1 room, I try to put my phone in another room.

✓ If I study in one room, I try to put my phone in another room.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'room'; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being inside a room. Also, '1 room' should be 'one room' for clarity and formality.

× It helps me to concentrate on my study and time because if my phone phone is with me it reduce my concentration which makes a lot of time.

✓ It helps me concentrate on my studies and time because if my phone is with me, it reduces my concentration, which wastes a lot of time.

'My study and time' should be 'my studies and time' to reflect plural form as 'studies' refers to academic work in general. 'Phone phone' is a repetition error. 'It reduce' should be 'it reduces' to agree with singular subject. 'Makes a lot of time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'wastes a lot of time'.