列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and using linking words for coherence. Also, use more varied vocabulary to express your points more naturally.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go grocery shopping because it helps me stay organized and focused on what I need. Moreover, it allows me to stick to my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your points. Also, avoid vague expressions and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for work because it helps me stay focused and productive. Additionally, it allows me to keep track of completed tasks and plan my time more efficiently.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly address the question with a clear opinion and provide specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'I think this one is by persons.'

範例: I believe some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory. In contrast, I find lists helpful for staying organized and productive.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains unclear phrases and minor errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect reasons. Also, avoid confusing expressions like 'it can get medicine.'

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my list anytime. On the other hand, paper lists can be forgotten at home or damaged during the day.

× This way it helps me to be organized and more focused on the things that I came to get.

✓ This way it helps me to be organized and more focused on the things that I have come to get.

The verb 'came' is the simple past tense, but here the present perfect 'have come' is appropriate because the action relates to the present context of shopping. Using the past participle 'have come' correctly connects the past action to the present moment.

× With this I am able to articulate my time to.

✓ With this I am able to allocate my time too.

The word 'articulate' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'allocate' meaning to distribute or assign. Also, 'to' should be 'too' to mean 'also'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the preposition and word choice.

× I am not sure of this answer because I think this one is by persons.

✓ I am not sure about this answer because I think it depends on the person.

The phrase 'this one is by persons' is unclear and incorrect. The correct expression is 'it depends on the person' to indicate variability among individuals. Also, 'of' should be 'about' after 'sure'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Myself, I like to prepare list because it helps me be on record.

✓ I like to prepare a list because it helps me keep a record.

'Myself' is incorrectly used as a subject; 'I' is correct. Also, 'prepare list' needs an article 'a list'. The phrase 'be on record' is better expressed as 'keep a record' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer making lists on my phone instead of on paper because on paper I can easily leave it at home or it can get medicine on my way to work or on my way out.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone instead of on paper because I can easily leave paper at home or it can get damaged on my way to work or when I go out.

The phrase 'it can get medicine' is incorrect; likely intended 'damaged'. Also, 'leave it at home' is ambiguous; specifying 'leave paper at home' clarifies the meaning. 'On my way out' is better expressed as 'when I go out' for clarity.