列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'making list', you can say 'I love making a list because it helps me remember everything I need.'

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget items if I don't. Therefore, making a list ensures I buy all the essentials and avoid unnecessary trips.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and clearer linking words. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. For example, instead of saying 'it makes me productive' twice, you can explain how it helps you achieve tasks efficiently.

範例: Yes, I make a list every morning for my work. It helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. By checking the list regularly, I ensure I don't miss any important tasks, which boosts my productivity.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but the sentences are unclear and contain grammatical mistakes. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect reasons logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and feel discouraged if they don't achieve all their goals. Additionally, it requires regular dedication, which some may find difficult to maintain.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by making sentences more concise and using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases like 'making the list on my mobile phone' and 'keeping my list on the phone'.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists, which causes problems. Using my phone makes it easier to track and remember tasks throughout the day.

× Yes, I love making list whenever I go to the shopping because I tend to forget a lot of things whenever I do not make any list of the things that I need to bring to the home.

✓ Yes, I love making lists whenever I go shopping because I tend to forget a lot of things whenever I do not make any list of the things that I need to bring home.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to making more than one list over time. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' as 'shopping' is an activity here. 'Bring to the home' is better as 'bring home' because 'home' does not need 'the' in this context.

× And this way I think they're making the list is adequate for me because I do not forget anything and I can bring all the things that is essential for me.

✓ And this way I think making the list is adequate for me because I do not forget anything and I can bring all the things that are essential for me.

The phrase 'they're making the list' is incorrect; it should be 'making the list'. Also, 'things that is essential' should be 'things that are essential' because 'things' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'.

× Yes, I make a list for my work, so I do it in the morning.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work, so I do it in the morning.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present tense context, so no correction is needed.

× It makes me productive and it's helped me set goals and I can just go on to the list to check if I miss anything and it is making me very productive.

✓ It makes me productive and it has helped me set goals, and I can just go to the list to check if I have missed anything, and it makes me very productive.

The phrase 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity. 'Go on to the list' is better as 'go to the list'. 'If I miss anything' should be 'if I have missed anything' to correctly use present perfect tense for checking past actions relevant to the present. 'It is making me very productive' is better as 'it makes me very productive' to maintain consistent tense.

× I think some people find making list as a boring talks and sometimes they might not meet their expectation of reaching the goals that they have just thought they would in which they have kept in the list.

✓ I think some people find making lists boring and sometimes they might not meet their expectations of reaching the goals that they have just thought they would, which they have kept in the list.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to indicate plural. 'A boring talks' is incorrect; it should be 'boring' or 'a boring task'. 'Expectation' should be plural 'expectations' to match 'some people'. The phrase 'in which they have kept in the list' is redundant; 'which they have kept in the list' is sufficient.

× So I think maybe because it might take some dedication to do it on a regular basis.

✓ So I think maybe it's because it might take some dedication to do it regularly.

The phrase 'do it on a regular basis' is correct but can be simplified to 'do it regularly' for better flow. Also, 'maybe because' needs a subject like 'it's' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually prefer making the list on my mobile phone because I tend to lose the paper if I make the list on the paper and that would cause problems for me.

✓ I usually prefer making the list on my mobile phone because I tend to lose the paper if I make the list on paper, and that would cause problems for me.

'On the paper' should be 'on paper' because 'paper' here is an uncountable noun referring to the material, so no article is needed.

× So keeping my list on the phone is very much easier.

✓ So keeping my list on the phone is much easier.

The phrase 'very much easier' is incorrect; it should be 'much easier' to correctly modify the comparative adjective 'easier'.

× I can track back and I can just use this phone as a tool on a daily basis so I can remember the list that needs to be done.

✓ I can track back and I can just use this phone as a tool on a daily basis so I can remember the lists that need to be done.

'The list that needs to be done' implies a single list, but context suggests multiple tasks or lists, so 'lists that need to be done' is more appropriate. Also, 'track back' is informal; 'refer back' or 'look back' might be better, but since it is not in the problem list, it is left as is.