列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I doesn't have' nên là 'I don't have'. Bạn cũng nên tránh nói lặp lại và cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I know exactly what I need. I just buy a few groceries that are running low at home, so I find making a list unnecessary.

建議: Bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'make a leash' thay vì 'make a list', 'I have write' thay vì 'I write'. Câu trả lời cũng thiếu sự mạch lạc và rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me focus on my goals. I write down my tasks in a notebook, but sometimes I find it hard to concentrate fully on them.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ 'warranty' không đúng ngữ cảnh, có thể bạn muốn nói 'spontaneity'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find them too restrictive. They feel it takes away the spontaneity, especially when shopping, so they prefer to decide on the spot.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ 'I find it frequent' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient. I don't need to carry a pen or notebook, and I can quickly add items even when I'm busy.

× I just buy a little some groceries that I doesn't have at home

✓ I just buy a few groceries that I don't have at home

The phrase 'a little some groceries' is incorrect because 'groceries' is a countable plural noun, so 'a few' should be used instead of 'a little'. Also, 'doesn't' is incorrect for the first person singular; it should be 'don't'.

× I just buy a little some groceries that I doesn't have at home

✓ I just buy a few groceries that I don't have at home

The verb 'doesn't' is used incorrectly with the pronoun 'I'. The correct form is 'don't' for first person singular subjects.

× so it doesn't grow

✓ so it doesn't grow

This sentence fragment is unclear and likely incorrect in context, but grammatically 'doesn't' is correct for third person singular. However, the meaning is unclear and may need rephrasing.

× Well for my work I usually make a leash because it can help me to concentrate about my aim also my goal

✓ Well, for my work I usually make a list because it can help me concentrate on my aims and goals

The word 'leash' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. Also, 'aim' and 'goal' should be plural to match the context. The preposition 'about' is incorrect here; 'concentrate on' is correct.

× it can help me to concentrate about my aim also my goal

✓ it can help me concentrate on my aims and goals

The verb 'concentrate' is followed by the preposition 'on', not 'about'. Also, 'aim' and 'goal' should be plural to match the context.

× I have write it in the note

✓ I have written it in the note

The present perfect tense requires the past participle form of the verb. 'Write' should be 'written' after 'have'.

× but usually I doesn't concentrate about it

✓ but usually I don't concentrate on it

The verb 'doesn't' is incorrect with the pronoun 'I'; it should be 'don't'. Also, 'concentrate' is followed by 'on', not 'about'.

× but also make a list a bit too restrictive and feel it takes away those warranty from things like shopping

✓ but also find making a list a bit too restrictive and feel it takes away the fun from things like shopping

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'make' should be 'find making' to express opinion. 'Warranty' is incorrect; likely intended 'fun'. Also, 'those warranty' is incorrect; 'the fun' is appropriate.

× so they might prefer to go with their flowers

✓ so they might prefer to go with their feelings

The word 'flowers' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'feelings' or 'flaws'. The pronoun 'their' is correct but the noun is wrong.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I find it frequent

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I find it convenient

The word 'frequent' is an adjective meaning 'happening often' and is incorrectly used here. The correct adjective is 'convenient' to express ease of use.

× It's very convenient for me because I don't have to take some pen or notebook to write it because it's very because sometimes I have very limited times so it's kind of safe

✓ It's very convenient for me because I don't have to take a pen or notebook to write it, and sometimes I have very limited time, so it's kind of safe

The sentence has repeated 'because' and awkward structure. 'Some pen' should be 'a pen'. 'Times' should be 'time' as uncountable. The sentence needs conjunction 'and' to connect ideas properly.