列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и не совсем естественен. Постарайтесь избегать повторения слов и формулировать ответ более связно и логично. Используйте связующие слова для улучшения структуры ответа.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop, but I think I should because I often forget to buy some items.

建議: Ответ слишком короткий и не содержит подробностей. Следует добавить объяснение, почему это неудобно, и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

範例: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I tried it once and found it quite inconvenient since it interrupted my workflow.

建議: Ответ содержит разговорные выражения и неформальный стиль, что снижает естественность. Рекомендуется использовать более формальный язык и связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it's a waste of time. However, I believe making lists can be helpful if you stay flexible, as plans often change.

建議: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения. Следует избегать тавтологии и использовать более точные формулировки с логическими связками.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I don't have to worry about losing paper lists.

× Actually no, but I think I should do this because I often forget some products to buy some products.

✓ Actually no, but I think I should do this because I often forget to buy some products.

The phrase 'forget some products to buy some products' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'forget to buy some products' where 'to buy' is the infinitive form used after 'forget' to indicate an action that was not done.

× No, but I tried to do this and this is really not convenient thing.

✓ No, but I tried to do this and this is really not a convenient thing.

The phrase 'not convenient thing' lacks the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'thing'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner.

× 'Cause they don't like to waste their time. So that foolish thing.

✓ 'Cause they don't like to waste their time. That's a foolish thing.

The phrase 'So that foolish thing' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'That's a foolish thing' to correctly express the idea with proper subject and verb.

× As for me, you, you can make lists, but you should be flexible because your plans can change.

✓ As for me, I think you can make lists, but you should be flexible because your plans can change.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes 'me' and 'you' pronouns. To express personal opinion, 'I think you can make lists' is appropriate.

× I prefer to make a list in my phone 'cause it's convenient thing.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause it's a convenient thing.

The correct preposition for devices like 'phone' is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'a' is needed before 'convenient thing' as it is a singular countable noun.

× It's more convenient thing than to make a list on paper.

✓ It's more convenient than making a list on paper.

The phrase 'more convenient thing' is incorrect; 'convenient' is an adjective and does not need 'thing' here. Also, after 'more convenient than', the verb should be in gerund form 'making'.

× With paper you can lose lose your paper or whatever you do.

✓ With paper, you can lose it or whatever you do.

The repetition 'lose lose' is an error. Also, 'lose your paper' is redundant after 'with paper'. Using 'lose it' is clearer and more natural.