列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is good but try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'buying', you can say 'impulsive purchases'.

範例: Yes, I usually make a checklist before going shopping because it helps me avoid impulsive purchases and restricts unnecessary spending. Moreover, it allows me to keep track of what I need to buy and what to avoid.

建議: Try to correct grammatical errors and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, clarify your points with better vocabulary and sentence structure.

範例: No, I usually don't make lists for my work because I have a sharp memory. Therefore, I keep all the tasks I need to complete in my mind and plan my work accordingly when I go to the office.

建議: Focus on sentence clarity and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

範例: Some people may dislike making lists because it adds extra burden and makes their already hectic work feel more overwhelming. Additionally, they might find the process of listing tasks boring.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas clearly. Avoid vague phrases and be more specific in your explanation.

範例: I mostly prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because using paper can be inconvenient. For instance, it can be difficult to find the paper, and sometimes it gets lost. Using my phone is more reliable and easier to manage.

× Yes, I usually make a checklist before going to shopping because it it prevents me from extra buying and impulsive buying so it restrict my buying behaviour and it helped me to track down what to do by what to buy and what not to.

✓ Yes, I usually make a checklist before going shopping because it prevents me from extra buying and impulsive buying, so it restricts my buying behaviour and it helps me to track what to buy and what not to.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'it it' is a repetition error. 'Restrict' should be 'restricts' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Track down what to do by what to buy and what not to' is awkward; better phrased as 'track what to buy and what not to'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× No, I usually don't make lists for my work because my memory is quite sharp. So I do all the all the tucks what need to be done today in my mind and I remember all those things and go to my office and do the work is planned.

✓ No, I usually don't make lists for my work because my memory is quite sharp. So I do all the tasks that need to be done today in my mind, and I remember all those things, then go to my office and do the work as planned.

'Tucks' is a misspelling of 'tasks'. 'What need to be done' should be 'that need to be done' to correctly introduce the relative clause. 'Do the work is planned' is incorrect; it should be 'do the work as planned' to express the intended meaning. These corrections fix vocabulary and sentence structure errors.

× People may not like making list because it might make them feel that extra burden and make things more hectic as the work itself is a hectic job.

✓ People may not like making lists because it might make them feel that extra burden and make things more hectic as the work itself is a hectic job.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is needed here to generalize the activity. This correction aligns with standard plural usage.

× It's it add up add up the things to do so they might feel boring to do listing.

✓ It adds up the things to do, so they might feel bored of making lists.

'It's it add up add up' is incorrect and repetitive; corrected to 'It adds up'. 'Feel boring' is incorrect; it should be 'feel bored' to express emotion. 'Do listing' is awkward; better phrased as 'making lists'. These corrections improve verb form and clarity.

× I mostly prefer making a list on my phone rather than paper because doing things done in paper might be more hectic.

✓ I mostly prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because doing things on paper might be more hectic.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'paper'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to writing or doing things on a surface like paper. Adding 'on' before 'paper' maintains parallel structure with 'on my phone'.

× For example, taking pain and then finding a paper where it is and then again writing down all those lists and memorizing it.

✓ For example, taking pain to find a paper where it is, then writing down all those lists again and memorizing them.

The phrase 'taking pain' is incomplete; it should be 'taking pain to find'. The sentence is a run-on and lacks clarity; restructuring improves flow. 'Memorizing it' should be 'memorizing them' to refer to 'lists' (plural). These changes improve sentence structure and pronoun agreement.

× Or sometime it might we might also lose that paper.

✓ Or sometimes we might also lose that paper.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'it might we might' is redundant; removing 'it might' clarifies the sentence. These corrections fix pronoun and adverb usage.