列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和词汇。

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I can remember most of the things I need to buy.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达目的，并注意单复数和词汇的正确使用。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, especially when I prepare for exams, to help me complete my tasks efficiently.

建議: 回答缺乏连贯性，语法和表达不准确。建议理清思路，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并准确表达观点。

範例: Maybe some people think making lists doesn't work for them, and nowadays many prefer not to use pen and paper to record their tasks because they find it inconvenient.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因，使用正确的时态和词汇。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me remember better, while using my phone doesn't have the same effect.

× No, I don't make a list when I would go to the shopping, go to shopping because most of the things I need to buy was in my mind so I can remember, uh, what I need to buy and I will go to the market.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping because most of the things I need to buy are in my mind, so I can remember what I need to buy and I will go to the market.

句中“would go to the shopping”中的“would”用法不当，应使用一般现在时“go”表示习惯动作；“go to the shopping”应改为“go shopping”，因为“shopping”作为动名词不需要冠词；“most of the things I need to buy was”中主语是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× No, I don't make a list when I would go to the shopping, go to shopping because most of the things I need to buy was in my mind so I can remember, uh, what I need to buy and I will go to the market.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping because most of the things I need to buy are in my mind, so I can remember what I need to buy and I will go to the market.

“most of the things”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是“was”。

× Yes, I usually do a list for my work and especially in my prepared my exam time because I want to complete my words, my preparation.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work, especially when I prepare for my exam because I want to complete my work and my preparation.

“do a list”应改为“make a list”，因为英语中通常用“make a list”；“my prepared my exam time”结构混乱，应改为“when I prepare for my exam”；“my words”应为“my work”，符合语境。

× Yes, I usually do a list for my work and especially in my prepared my exam time because I want to complete my words, my preparation.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work, especially when I prepare for my exam because I want to complete my work and my preparation.

“in my prepared my exam time”中“in”用法不当，应改为“when”引导时间状语从句。

× Maybe they think it is not work for them and they think and maybe now most of people don't like use the pen to to record their what they want to do so it maybe they seem not good.

✓ Maybe they think it does not work for them and maybe now most people don't like to use a pen to record what they want to do, so maybe it seems not good.

“it is not work”应改为“it does not work”，因为“work”作为动词需要助动词“does”；“don't like use”应改为“don't like to use”，动词“like”后面接不定式；“most of people”应改为“most people”；“seem not good”应改为“seems not good”，主语是“it”，谓语动词需第三人称单数形式。

× Maybe they think it is not work for them and they think and maybe now most of people don't like use the pen to to record their what they want to do so it maybe they seem not good.

✓ Maybe they think it does not work for them and maybe now most people don't like to use a pen to record what they want to do, so maybe it seems not good.

“work for them”中“for”用法正确，但整体句子结构混乱，需调整；“to to record”重复，应去掉一个“to”；“their what they want to do”结构错误，应改为“what they want to do”。

× Maybe they think it is not work for them and they think and maybe now most of people don't like use the pen to to record their what they want to do so it maybe they seem not good.

✓ Maybe they think it does not work for them and maybe now most people don't like to use a pen to record what they want to do, so maybe it seems not good.

“most of people”应改为“most people”，因为“most”后面直接接复数名词时不需要“of”。

× Maybe they think it is not work for them and they think and maybe now most of people don't like use the pen to to record their what they want to do so it maybe they seem not good.

✓ Maybe they think it does not work for them and maybe now most people don't like to use a pen to record what they want to do, so maybe it seems not good.

“their what they want to do”中“their”使用错误，应去掉，直接用“what they want to do”。

× Maybe for me it is it is making leaves on paper the small working for me because I think when I was writing the paper I think they can improve my memories and I will keep it in mind, but in the form I think I don't think so.

✓ Maybe for me it is making lists on paper that works better for me because I think when I write on paper, it can improve my memory and I will keep it in mind, but on the phone, I don't think so.

“making leaves on paper”应为“making lists on paper”；“the small working for me”结构错误，应改为“that works better for me”；“when I was writing the paper”时态不当，应改为“一般现在时”表示习惯动作；“improve my memories”应为“improve my memory”；“in the form”应为“on the phone”，介词使用错误。

× Maybe for me it is it is making leaves on paper the small working for me because I think when I was writing the paper I think they can improve my memories and I will keep it in mind, but in the form I think I don't think so.

✓ Maybe for me it is making lists on paper that works better for me because I think when I write on paper, it can improve my memory and I will keep it in mind, but on the phone, I don't think so.

“when I was writing the paper”中使用过去进行时不合适，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“when I write on paper”。