列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'walk every anywhere' and 'interested in a scene.' To improve, try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly address the question.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. I prefer to browse freely and pick up items that catch my attention.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive ('what I need to do and what I need to do today'). Try to use more natural phrasing and add a linking phrase to explain why making a list helps you.

範例: Yes, I always make a list in the morning because it helps me organize my tasks and stay focused throughout the day.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and is unclear ('they sing is not convenient'). Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Also, provide a more detailed reason with linking words.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and time-consuming to write everything down.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding a supporting detail with a linking word to make it more complete.

範例: Usually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit it whenever I need to.

× I'll just walk every anywhere I want to walk and if I'm interested in a scene I'll just pick it up and put it into my cart.

✓ I'll just walk anywhere I want to walk and if I'm interested in a scene I'll just pick it up and put it into my cart.

The phrase 'every anywhere' is incorrect because 'every' is not used with 'anywhere'. The correct expression is simply 'anywhere' to indicate any place without restriction.

× Yes, I always make a list in the morning so I have a good mind to know what I need to do and what I need to do today.

✓ Yes, I always make a list in the morning so I have a clear mind to know what I need to do today.

The phrase 'have a good mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'have a clear mind' to indicate mental clarity. Also, 'what I need to do and what I need to do today' is redundant; simplifying to 'what I need to do today' improves clarity.

× Because they sing is not convenient. You take the time for them to write something there.

✓ Because it is not convenient. It takes time for them to write something down.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verbs. 'They sing' is incorrect; it should be 'it is' referring to the activity. Also, 'You take the time for them' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'It takes time for them' to indicate the action requires time. 'Write something there' should be 'write something down' as the correct phrasal verb.