列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, include linking words to improve coherence and add a bit more specific detail to enrich your response.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I am an organized person. This helps me avoid impulse buying and ensures I don't forget anything important. For example, last week I made a list before going to the grocery store, which saved me time and money.

建議: Your answer has some unclear and incomplete sentences, which affects clarity. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly, avoid filler words like 'umm', and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, be careful with grammar and word choice to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I am a teacher. Before leaving each day, I plan all the tasks I want to accomplish with my students. This method works well as it keeps me organized and ensures a smooth workflow.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and filler phrases that reduce clarity. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they haven't developed the habit or are not used to planning ahead. Additionally, they might find it unnecessary or prefer to be more spontaneous.

建議: Your answer is understandable but includes some informal language and minor errors. Try to use more formal vocabulary and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, clarify your sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper, especially using sticky notes, because I can see them physically, which helps me stay organized. Also, since I'm not very tech-savvy, paper lists are easier for me to manage.

× I would say I'm very organized person and I do not like to do impulse buying or buy stuff that I do not plan on and I also do not want to forget certain things that I need to buy.

✓ I would say I'm a very organized person and I do not like to do impulse buying or buy stuff that I do not plan on and I also do not want to forget certain things that I need to buy.

The phrase 'very organized person' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun 'person'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Adding 'a' corrects the sentence.

× And before I leave for the day, I make sure I lay out every single thing that I wanna do, umm, with my students and I stay.

✓ And before I leave for the day, I make sure I lay out every single thing that I wanna do, umm, with my students and stay focused.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'and I stay' which is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought by adding 'stay focused' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× So I do make a list of everything that I wanna do at my work that keeps.

✓ So I do make a list of everything that I wanna do at my work because it keeps me organized.

The phrase 'that keeps' is incomplete and does not connect properly to the rest of the sentence. Adding 'because it keeps me organized' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× And yes, it works because it keeps me in check, it keeps me organized, and it keeps an easy flow of my license.

✓ And yes, it works because it keeps me in check, it keeps me organized, and it keeps an easy flow of my lessons.

The word 'license' is incorrect in this context. The intended word is likely 'lessons' referring to teaching. This is a misuse of a noun and pronoun context. Correcting to 'lessons' makes the sentence meaningful.

× To be honest, any my opinion, I think some people do not like making lists because they did not train themselves to do so or they are simply not organized or simply not, you know, planning things ahead of time.

✓ To be honest, in my opinion, I think some people do not like making lists because they have not trained themselves to do so or they are simply not organized or simply not, you know, planning things ahead of time.

The phrase 'any my opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my opinion'. Also, 'did not train' should be 'have not trained' to match the present perfect tense used for past actions with present relevance.

× And so in my opinion, basically it's about the fact that they do not make it a habit and they haven't done it.

✓ And so in my opinion, basically it's about the fact that they do not make it a habit and they haven't done it before.

The phrase 'they haven't done it' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'before' clarifies the meaning that they have not formed the habit previously.

× I'm also not tech savvy to the so that's it probably explains why I prefer to make my list on paper.

✓ I'm also not tech savvy, so that's probably why I prefer to make my list on paper.

The phrase 'to the so that's it' is incorrect and confusing. Removing 'to the' and 'it' and adding a comma improves clarity and grammatical correctness.