列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lengthy. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or example using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go grocery shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need, so I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating the word 'list' too often. Use linking words like 'which' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, which helps me stay organised and complete tasks efficiently, saving me a lot of time.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and uses negative words like 'lethargic' and 'lazy' which may not be appropriate. Try to give a more balanced and clear explanation with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to explain your points.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a plan.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tenses and smoother linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'. Also, avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to carry and I don't have to worry about losing them, unlike paper lists which can be misplaced.

× I like to make a list when I go for taking my grocery because it is very helpful when I go in the shopping center or grocery store because sometime I forget items but with the help of list I remind that type of item.

✓ I like to make a list when I go to take my grocery because it is very helpful when I go to the shopping center or grocery store because sometimes I forget items but with the help of a list I remember that type of item.

The phrase 'go for taking' is incorrect; after 'go', the base form of the verb or 'to' + base verb is used, so 'go to take' is correct. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Remind' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'remember' to indicate recalling items. Also, 'in the shopping center' should be 'to the shopping center' to indicate direction. 'With the help of list' needs an article 'a' before 'list'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I like to make a list when I go in the shopping center or grocery store because sometime I forget items but with the help of list I remind that type of item.

✓ I like to make a list when I go to the shopping center or grocery store because sometimes I forget items but with the help of a list I remember that type of item.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when indicating movement towards a place; 'to' should be used instead. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'With the help of list' requires the article 'a' before 'list'. These changes correct the prepositional and article usage.

× Most of individuals do not like to make a list because they become lethargic in their life.

✓ Most individuals do not like to make a list because they become lethargic in their life.

'Most of individuals' is incorrect; 'most' is used without 'of' when followed directly by a plural noun. Hence, 'Most individuals' is correct.

× People prefer to do lazy work and they do not want to do effective and efficient work.

✓ People prefer to do lazy work and they do not want to do effective and efficient work.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence related to adjectives or adverbs as per the provided list.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to carry.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to carry.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence related to prepositions as per the provided list.

× Sometime I lost list on paper and it is very difficult situation for me.

✓ Sometimes I lose the list on paper and it is a very difficult situation for me.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Lost' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'lose' is appropriate. 'List' requires the article 'the'. 'Very difficult situation' needs the article 'a' before 'very difficult situation'.

× But in now times I like to store my list in mobile phone which is very helpful for me.

✓ But nowadays I like to store my list in my mobile phone which is very helpful for me.

'In now times' is incorrect; 'nowadays' is the correct adverb. 'Mobile phone' requires a possessive pronoun 'my' to specify ownership. These corrections improve naturalness and grammatical correctness.