列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, provide a more complete explanation with linking words to improve coherence. For example, you could say: "Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. Additionally, it saves me time by keeping me organized."

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. Additionally, it saves me time by keeping me organized.

建議: Focus on improving fluency and reducing hesitations or repeated words. Use clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, you could say: "Yes, I make a work list every weekend when I receive my schedule for the week. This method works well because it helps me avoid being late and saves a lot of time."

範例: Yes, I make a work list every weekend when I receive my schedule for the week. This method works well because it helps me avoid being late and saves a lot of time.

建議: Avoid vague or negative terms like "irresponsibility" without explanation. Instead, explain reasons clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "Some people prefer not to make lists because they like to be spontaneous and follow their schedule flexibly."

範例: Some people prefer not to make lists because they like to be spontaneous and follow their schedule flexibly.

建議: Work on reducing repetition and improving sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is portable and always with me, making it more convenient than paper."

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is portable and always with me, making it more convenient than paper.

× The main reason of making a list of things is is to help help to not forgetting the things for for buying.

✓ The main reason for making a list of things is to help not forget the things to buy.

The phrase 'reason of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'reason for'. Also, 'help to not forgetting' is incorrect; it should be 'help not forget'. Additionally, 'for buying' should be 'to buy' to express purpose correctly.

× And the other reason of making a making making list is to is to become.

✓ And the other reason for making a list is to become organized.

Again, 'reason of' should be 'reason for'. The sentence is incomplete and repetitive; it needs completion to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× When I get a new schedule in the starting of the week, then I always try to make a list and it obviously works very well for me.

✓ When I get a new schedule at the start of the week, I always try to make a list and it obviously works very well for me.

The phrase 'in the starting of the week' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at the start of the week'. Also, 'then' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother flow.

× Firstly, it helps me per, it helps me for not getting late from my work and it saves me a lot of time.

✓ Firstly, it helps me not to be late for my work and it saves me a lot of time.

The phrase 'helps me per' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or error. 'Helps me for not getting late from my work' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'helps me not to be late for my work'.

× Some people don't like to make a list because of their irresponsibility and they, they like to go with the flow of the schedule.

✓ Some people don't like to make a list because of their irresponsibility and they like to go with the flow of the schedule.

The sentence is mostly correct; the repeated 'they' is a speech hesitation and can be omitted in writing for clarity.

× And additionally, they, uh, they always like to go, they always like to do the things with the flow of the time.

✓ Additionally, they always like to go with the flow of time.

The phrase 'do the things with the flow of the time' is awkward and incorrect. The idiomatic expression is 'go with the flow of time' or simply 'go with the flow'.

× Nowadays technologies play a vital role, so I I prefer to make a list on phone rather than on a paper because phone phone is portable and nowadays a human being is stuck with the phone, so I think it is it is more convenient to follow the list from the phone.

✓ Nowadays, technology plays a vital role, so I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because the phone is portable and nowadays people are attached to their phones, so I think it is more convenient to follow the list on the phone.

'Technologies' should be singular 'technology' when referring to the general concept. 'On phone' should be 'on my phone' or 'on the phone'. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' without an article. 'Phone phone' is a repetition error. 'A human being is stuck with the phone' is awkward; 'people are attached to their phones' is more natural. Also, repeated words like 'I I' and 'it is it is' should be corrected.