列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and a spelling mistake ('lust' instead of 'list'). Also, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea in different words. Try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences for better clarity.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and not forget important items. For instance, last week I saved time by following my list strictly, which prevented me from buying unnecessary things. So, making a list is a useful habit that helps me shop efficiently.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'so' and 'also' to connect ideas. Be careful with subject-verb agreement and plural forms. Try to be more concise and clear in your explanation.

範例: To be honest, I often forget many tasks. So, when I have important work, I make a list prioritizing the tasks, which helps me meet deadlines. Also, I set reminders on my phone to ensure I don't miss any work.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and minor grammatical errors. Avoid repeating words like 'so' consecutively. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'since' to explain reasons clearly. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy.

範例: In my opinion, some people have sharp memories and can easily remember things. Because of this, they prefer not to waste time making lists and directly start their tasks.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and informal fillers like 'uh'. Avoid using fillers and ensure correct verb forms, e.g., 'lose' instead of 'lost'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I can edit and check my list anytime I need. Also, it's better than paper lists since papers can easily get lost.

× Absolutely, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helped me to stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ Absolutely, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me to stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.

The sentence mixes present tense 'always make' with past tense 'helped'. To maintain consistency and correctness, 'helped' should be changed to 'helps' to match the present tense context.

× For example, last week I saved a lot of time by sticking to all my tasks and avoiding unnecessary purchase.

✓ For example, last week I saved a lot of time by sticking to all my tasks and avoiding unnecessary purchases.

The noun 'purchase' should be plural 'purchases' because it refers to multiple items or instances, matching the plural context.

× Therefore, making a lust is useful habit that helped me to shop efficiently.

✓ Therefore, making a list is a useful habit that helps me to shop efficiently.

The sentence misses the article 'a' before 'useful habit'. Also, 'lust' is a typo and should be 'list'. Additionally, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× To be honest, I most of the time I forget to do a lot of work.

✓ To be honest, most of the time I forget to do a lot of work.

The phrase 'I most of the time I' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the first 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× So whenever I'm doing something important, I make a list according to the priority of a task which helped me to meet up the deadlines.

✓ So whenever I'm doing something important, I make a list according to the priority of a task which helps me to meet the deadlines.

The verb 'helped' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'helps' to agree with the ongoing action. Also, 'meet up the deadlines' should be 'meet the deadlines'.

× As well as I keep a reminder on my phones which help me to remind that I have to do that work now.

✓ I also keep a reminder on my phone which helps me to remember that I have to do that work now.

'As well as' is incorrectly used; 'I also' is better. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' as usually one phone is used. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'reminder'. 'Remind' should be 'remember' for correct meaning.

× So they don't like to waste their time in making the list they they directly dive into their task.

✓ So they don't like to waste their time making the list; they directly dive into their task.

The phrase 'in making' is incorrect; 'waste time making' is correct. Also, 'they they' is a repetition error. A semicolon or period separates the two independent clauses properly.

× I prefer to make a list in my phone because all the time my phone is with me, so I can edit my list at any time and check my list uh whenever I need.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me, so I can edit my list at any time and check it whenever I need.

The correct preposition is 'on' for devices like phones. 'All the time my phone is with me' is better as 'my phone is always with me'. Repetition of 'my list' can be reduced to 'check it' for clarity.

× So it is better to make a list on a phone because sometimes we can lost a paper also.

✓ So it is better to make a list on a phone because sometimes we can lose a paper also.

The verb 'lost' is past tense but the modal 'can' requires base form 'lose'.