列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'lids' ควรเป็น 'lists' และประโยคควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน

範例: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Making a list helps me remember everything I need to buy during the day.

建議: คำตอบนี้มีความไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงประโยคที่ซ้ำซ้อนและไม่สมบูรณ์ ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์เพื่อสื่อความหมายได้ชัดเจน

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks. This way, I can improve my responsibility and meet deadlines more effectively.

建議: คำตอบนี้มีคำศัพท์ผิดและประโยคไม่สมบูรณ์ เช่น 'lit' ควรเป็น 'list' และประโยคควรมีความชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกันดีขึ้น ควรใช้คำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผล

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult or they are too lazy to write them. Others may not feel the need because they rarely forget things.

建議: คำตอบนี้มีคำศัพท์ผิด เช่น 'lid' ควรเป็น 'list' และประโยคควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays everyone uses their phones. At work, I also use my phone, so keeping my list there helps me avoid forgetting anything.

× Yes, I always make lids when I will go to outside because I am easy to forget.

✓ Yes, I always make lists when I go outside because I am likely to forget.

The phrase 'when I will go' is incorrect because future tense is not used after 'when' in time clauses. Also, 'lids' should be 'lists' and 'to outside' should be 'outside'. The correct form is simple present tense 'when I go outside' to indicate habitual action.

× Yes, I always make lids when I will go to outside because I am easy to forget.

✓ Yes, I always make lists when I go outside because I am likely to forget.

The word 'lids' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' to match the intended meaning. 'Lids' refers to covers, while 'lists' refers to written items.

× Yes, I always make lids when I will go to outside because I am easy to forget.

✓ Yes, I always make lists when I go outside because I am likely to forget.

The phrase 'to outside' is incorrect; the correct preposition is simply 'outside' without 'to'.

× So when I make a list that helped me to not forget what I want to do in the day.

✓ So when I make a list, it helps me not to forget what I want to do during the day.

The verb 'helped' is past tense but the sentence context is present habitual action, so 'helps' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'to not forget' is better as 'not to forget' and 'in the day' should be 'during the day'.

× So when I make a list that helped me to not forget what I want to do in the day.

✓ So when I make a list, it helps me not to forget what I want to do during the day.

The sentence needs a subject 'it' to refer to 'a list' and the verb should agree in number and tense.

× Yes, of course I make a list for my work because I tend to forget things easily.

✓ Yes, of course I make lists for my work because I tend to forget things easily.

Using 'lists' plural is more natural when referring to multiple tasks or occasions at work.

× So in the work environment I want to improve my skill and improve my responsibility to forget on the to forget on to meet the deadline.

✓ So in the work environment, I want to improve my skills and my responsibility to avoid forgetting in order to meet the deadline.

The original sentence is unclear and repetitive. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills'. The phrase 'to forget on the to forget on' is incorrect and should be replaced with 'to avoid forgetting'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× In my opinion, I think some of them think it's umm difficult things to make a lit because maybe they so lazy to get leads or some of them didn't tend to forget tax easily so.

✓ In my opinion, I think some of them find it difficult to make a list because maybe they are too lazy to get lists or some of them don't tend to forget tasks easily.

'Difficult things' should be 'difficult to make a list'. 'They so lazy' should be 'they are too lazy'. 'Get leads' should be 'get lists'. 'Didn't tend to forget tax' should be 'don't tend to forget tasks'. The sentence needs correction for grammar and clarity.

× In my opinion, I think some of them think it's umm difficult things to make a lit because maybe they so lazy to get leads or some of them didn't tend to forget tax easily so.

✓ In my opinion, I think some of them find it difficult to make a list because maybe they are too lazy to get lists or some of them don't tend to forget tasks easily.

'Lit' should be 'list'. 'Leads' should be 'lists'. 'Tax' should be 'tasks'. These are plural and singular form errors.

× In my opinion, I think some of them think it's umm difficult things to make a lit because maybe they so lazy to get leads or some of them didn't tend to forget tax easily so.

✓ In my opinion, I think some of them find it difficult to make a list because maybe they are too lazy to get lists or some of them don't tend to forget tasks easily.

The phrase 'to get leads' is incorrect; it should be 'to make lists' or 'to get lists'. Also, 'didn't tend to forget tax' is incorrect preposition and verb usage.

× I prefer to make a lid on my phone because nowadays everyone always use the phone and in my work environment I also use the phone too.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays everyone always uses the phone and in my work environment I also use the phone.

'Lid' should be 'list'. 'Everyone always use' should be 'everyone always uses' to agree with singular subject 'everyone'. 'Also use the phone too' is redundant; 'also use the phone' is sufficient.

× I prefer to make a lid on my phone because nowadays everyone always use the phone and in my work environment I also use the phone too.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays everyone always uses the phone and in my work environment I also use the phone.

The verb 'use' should be 'uses' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'.