列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'answer' thay vì 'remember', 'influence buying' thay vì 'impulse buying', và 'leaves' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to remember everything important. It helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying. I usually use a shopping app to keep track of my items.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và chính tả, ví dụ 'lift' nên là 'list', 'on the line' nên là 'on track', 'test' có thể là 'tasks'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và có liên kết logic giữa các câu. Hãy sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để thể hiện ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work. It helps me stay on track and focus on my tasks. I use a digital app that reminds me of deadlines, and I feel satisfied when I can check things off.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'flashable' không đúng, có thể bạn muốn nói 'flexible', 'tired down' nên là 'tied down', và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Some people prefer to be flexible and don't want to be tied down by a list. They enjoy doing things spontaneously because it makes them feel free.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'ask' thay vì 'add', câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý một cách mạch lạc để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add or delete items. Also, I don't have to worry about losing my list, which helps me stay organized.

× This. I always make a list when I shop to answer and don't forget anything important.

✓ Yes. I always make a list when I shop to remember and not forget anything important.

The phrase 'to answer' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'to remember'. The verb 'answer' is not appropriate in this context. Use 'remember' to express the purpose of making a list.

× It's help me stay within my budget and avoid influence buying.

✓ It helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'influence buying' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'impulse buying'.

× I use a shopping app to keep track of my leaves.

✓ I use a shopping app to keep track of my expenses.

The word 'leaves' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'expenses' or 'purchases'. 'Leaves' refers to parts of plants and is not appropriate here.

× Yes, I made a lift for my work.

✓ Yes, I made a list for my work.

The word 'lift' is incorrect; the correct word is 'list'. This is a singular noun error.

× It helps me stay on the line and focused on what I need to do.

✓ It helps me stay in line and focused on what I need to do.

The correct phrase is 'stay in line' meaning to stay organized or on track. 'Stay on the line' is incorrect in this context.

× I use a digital app that reminds me about the test and I feel good when I can check thing off.

✓ I use a digital app that reminds me about the tasks and I feel good when I can check things off.

The word 'test' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple items to do. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things'.

× Some people like to be flashable and don't want to be tired down by a list.

✓ Some people like to be flexible and don't want to be tied down by a list.

The word 'flashable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'flexible'. Also, 'tired down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tied down' meaning restricted.

× Grace make them feel free.

✓ Grace makes them feel free.

The subject 'Grace' is singular and requires the verb 'makes' in third person singular form. Also, 'Grace' seems to be a typo for 'Grace' or 'This' or 'This makes' but assuming 'Grace' is intended as a noun, the verb must agree.

× I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and accessible.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable in spoken English, so no correction needed here.

× For example, I can easily ask or delete.

✓ For example, I can easily add or delete items.

The word 'ask' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'add'. Also, 'items' clarifies what is being added or deleted.

× It is same any time with worrying about the same people also using my phone.

✓ It is the same anytime without worrying about other people also using my phone.

The sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'It is the same anytime' is better, and 'without worrying about other people also using my phone' clarifies the meaning.

× Help me stay organizing I can.

✓ It helps me stay organized.

The phrase 'Help me stay organizing I can' is incorrect. The correct form is 'It helps me stay organized' where 'organized' is an adjective describing the subject.