列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误，缺少动词和完整句子结构。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并简洁说明原因。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and stay organized.

建議: 回答较完整，但表达稍显冗长。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can handle everything without help, and they think making lists wastes time.

建議: 回答中出现不完整和不清晰的表达，语法错误较多。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达观点，并避免模糊或无意义的词汇。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and easier to edit than paper lists.

× I never make when I shop.

✓ I never make a list when I shop.

句子缺少宾语，动词make后面需要有宾语a list，表示“我从不列购物清单”。

× I find it very useful because make making a list reminds me of many important things.

✓ I find it very useful because making a list reminds me of many important things.

动词find后面接because引导的原因状语从句，make making是重复错误，应去掉make，保留making，表示“因为列清单提醒我许多重要的事情”。

× they don't want to waste time for making lists because they think it's not useful.

✓ they don't want to waste time making lists because they think it's not useful.

短语waste time后面直接接动名词making，不需要介词for，正确表达为waste time making lists。

× I prefer making a list on my phone because it is convenient and useful.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it is convenient and useful.

此句无语法错误，介词on用法正确，表示“在手机上列清单”。

× Nobody wants to look at the paper because it was a very hardly ******* time.

✓ Nobody wants to look at the paper because it was a very hard time.

hardly是副词，修饰动词，形容词hard用来修饰名词time，表示“艰难的时光”，此处应使用hard而非hardly。