列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и некоторые грамматические ошибки, например, "compile A to do list" и "I can avoid using this list". Постарайтесь говорить более связно и избегать пауз и повторов. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и уточните детали, например, почему список помогает избежать импульсивных покупок.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me stick to my budget and prevents me from buying things impulsively. For example, last week I saved money by only purchasing items on my list.

建議: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующие слова и более конкретные детали, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и содержательной. Например, объясните, как именно приоритизация помогает вам в работе.

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work and prioritize tasks based on their urgency. This method helps me manage my time efficiently and ensures that important deadlines are met.

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неполные мысли. Постарайтесь строить предложения правильно и завершать мысли. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более логичным и понятным.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they were never taught how to do it properly. Also, they might believe that making lists takes too much time, even though it actually helps them stay organized.

建議: Ответ не завершён и содержит ошибки, например, "to put items in white and black" неясно. Постарайтесь давать полные и чёткие ответы, избегать повторов и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

範例: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to visualize my tasks, but other times I use my phone apps for convenience. However, I have to be careful about my phone's battery life.

× I prefer to compile A to do list before I go shopping because it allows me to stay within a budget.

✓ I prefer to compile a to-do list before I go shopping because it allows me to stay within a budget.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun. Articles should be in lowercase unless at the beginning of a sentence.

× Moreover, I can avoid using this list.

✓ Moreover, I can avoid using the list.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used here; 'the list' is more appropriate because it refers to a specific list mentioned earlier.

× I can avoid, uh, impulse buying, uh, and not to forget some.

✓ I can avoid, uh, impulse buying and forgetting some items.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Not to forget some' is incomplete; it should be 'forgetting some items' to complete the thought properly.

× Or maybe they think that it take takes a lot of time but at the same time it help them to be.

✓ Or maybe they think that it takes a lot of time but at the same time it helps them to be organized.

The verbs 'take' and 'help' must agree with the singular subject 'it'. Therefore, 'takes' and 'helps' are correct. Also, the sentence was incomplete; 'to be' should be followed by an adjective like 'organized' to complete the meaning.

× I make some lists on a paper and to put items in white and black.

✓ I make some lists on paper and put items in black and white.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression. Also, 'to put' is unnecessary here; 'put' fits better. The phrase 'in white and black' should be 'in black and white' as it is the standard expression.