列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и не совсем естественен. Следует использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегать излишней сложности и повторов. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go. It helps me stay within my budget and remember everything I need. Also, I prefer writing it by hand because it feels more organized.

建議: Ответ неполный и содержит ошибки. Нужно завершить мысль, использовать правильные формы глаголов и связующие слова для плавности речи.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for work. It helps me mark urgent tasks and prioritize them, which improves my productivity.

建議: Ответ не завершён и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует строить полные предложения, использовать связки и объяснять причины более ясно.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they were never taught how to do it, or they think it takes too much time. However, lists can actually help avoid forgetting important tasks.

建議: Ответ неясен и содержит много пауз и ошибок. Нужно говорить более чётко, использовать правильные выражения и связки, чтобы сделать ответ понятным и логичным.

範例: It depends on my mood. Usually, I prefer making lists on paper because it's simple and clear. But when my phone is charged, I use apps to organize my tasks more efficiently.

× I prefer to compile it to this before my shopping because it allows me to stay within a budget.

✓ I prefer to compile it like this before my shopping because it allows me to stay within a budget.

The phrase 'compile it to this' is incorrect because 'compile' is not typically followed by 'to this'. The correct preposition here is 'like' to indicate the manner of compiling the list. Using 'like this' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× I do compile A to do list where I can mark some urgent tasks that I need to do 1st and also it help helps me to prioritize my tasks and to improve my.

✓ I do compile a to-do list where I can mark some urgent tasks that I need to do first, and it helps me to prioritize my tasks and improve my work.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase and hyphenation. '1st' should be written as 'first' in formal speech. 'help helps' is a duplication error; the correct verb form is 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The sentence was incomplete; adding 'work' completes the thought.

× I suspect they may not have been taught to create this kind of list or some of them think that it take it takes a lot of time but at the same time it help them and can avoid.

✓ I suspect they may not have been taught to create this kind of list, or some of them think that it takes a lot of time, but at the same time it helps them and can help avoid mistakes.

The phrase 'it take it takes' is a repetition error; the correct form is 'it takes' for third person singular. 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence was incomplete; adding 'help avoid mistakes' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer it soon, uh, prioritize my tasks, uh, using the paper to put it in white and black.

✓ I prefer, uh, to prioritize my tasks using paper to write in black and white.

The phrase 'prefer it soon' is unclear and incorrect; 'prefer to prioritize' is correct. 'using the paper to put it in white and black' is awkward; the correct expression is 'using paper to write in black and white'. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and confusing here.