列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ немного неестественный из-за использования фразы "compile A to do list" и отсутствия связующих слов. Рекомендуется использовать более естественные выражения и добавить связующее слово для плавности.

範例: Yes, I definitely prefer to make a shopping list using a pen because it helps me stay focused and stick to my budget.

建議: В ответе есть повтор слова "urgent" и некорректное выражение "before than others". Следует избегать повторов и использовать правильные конструкции с союзами для связности.

範例: Yes, I create a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks, especially when I have urgent deals that need to be done before others.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки, например, "I remember all their tasks" вместо "they remember". Рекомендуется улучшить грамматику и структуру предложения, а также использовать связующие слова.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they were never taught how to do it, or they have a good memory and can remember all their tasks, or they simply don't have enough time to make lists.

建議: Ответ содержит повтор "cross off items cross cross" и нечеткую формулировку. Рекомендуется избегать повторов и использовать более точные выражения с плавными связующими словами.

範例: It depends on my mood, of course. However, I find it more satisfying to write lists by hand because I can physically cross off items, which feels more rewarding.

× Definitely I prefer to compile A to do list using a pen.

✓ Definitely I prefer to compile a to-do list using a pen.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is in the middle of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun.

× Yes, I do create A to do list for my work.

✓ Yes, I do create a to-do list for my work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is in the middle of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun.

× especially when I have some urgent urgent deals to do before than others.

✓ especially when I have some urgent deals to do before others.

The phrase 'before than others' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'before others' without 'than'. Also, the repeated word 'urgent' should be corrected to a single 'urgent'.

× or they had a good memory so I remember all their tasks for the day,

✓ or they have a good memory so they remember all their tasks for the day,

The pronouns are inconsistent. 'They had' should be 'they have' to match the present tense context, and 'I remember' should be 'they remember' to refer back to 'they'. This maintains subject consistency.

× or they don't have enough time for doing this.

✓ or they don't have enough time to do this.

The phrase 'time for doing' is less natural. The correct form is 'time to do' when expressing purpose or availability.

× It's more satisfying when you have at least written by your own hand and also you can cross off items cross cross.

✓ It's more satisfying when you have at least written it by your own hand and also you can cross off items.

The phrase 'written by your own hand' needs the object 'it' to be clear. The repeated word 'cross' is redundant and should be removed. The adverb placement is corrected for clarity.