列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and add a bit more specific detail to enrich your response.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember essential items and prevents me from buying unnecessary things. For instance, I usually write the list on paper and carry it with me to stay organised.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains filler words and incomplete sentences. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, provide specific examples of how the list helps you.

範例: Yes, I make a work list because it helps me stay organised and focused on my tasks. I prefer using digital apps since they allow me to easily add, remove, or modify tasks whenever necessary.

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes reasons, but avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Also, consider giving a brief example to support your points.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time, so they prefer to rely on memory. Moreover, making lists can be stressful as it reminds them of unfinished tasks, which may cause anxiety.

建議: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good use of linking words. To improve, try to avoid informal phrases like 'Plus' and add a specific example to illustrate your point.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. Additionally, I can easily add, remove, or rearrange tasks, which improves my efficiency. For example, I often share my shopping list with my partner to coordinate our purchases.

× I usually write it down on a paper and, uh, have it with me.

✓ I usually write it down on paper and, uh, have it with me.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is an uncountable noun in this context and does not require an article. The correct preposition phrase is 'on paper'.

× Yes, I make the list of my work because this helps me to remain organised and focused on what I exactly need to do Umm.

✓ Yes, I make a list of my work because this helps me to remain organised and focused on what I exactly need to do. Umm.

The phrase 'make the list of my work' is incorrect because 'list' is a countable noun and should be preceded by an indefinite article 'a' when referring to any list, not a specific one. Also, 'the list' implies a specific list already known, which is not the case here.

× Preferably I use digital apps to make a list as it is more convenient if I want to make certain changes and umm I.

✓ Preferably, I use digital apps to make a list as it is more convenient if I want to make certain changes, and umm I...

A comma is needed after 'Preferably' to separate the introductory adverb. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and umm I', which is incomplete and should be finished or omitted for clarity.

× Additionally, it might be stressful for some people as they might worry about the things which are yet to be done.

✓ Additionally, it might be stressful for some people as they might worry about things which are yet to be done.

The phrase 'the things' is incorrect here because it refers to unspecified tasks. Omitting 'the' makes it more general and appropriate in this context.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always with me everywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always with me everywhere.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Plus I can send to my friend as well whenever needed.

✓ Plus, I can send it to my friend as well whenever needed.

The verb 'send' requires an object; 'it' (referring to the list) should be included. Also, a comma after 'Plus' improves sentence flow.