列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for clarity.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it's hard for me to remember everything at once. Sometimes, my mother helps me prepare it. Typically, the list contains around 20 to 30 items, which helps me shop efficiently.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about how the list helps you.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work using sticky notes, which I arrange on my table. This method helps me stay organized and focused, ensuring I complete all tasks by the end of the day. Therefore, making lists definitely works for me.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by using better vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Avoid negative words like 'lazy' and instead explain reasons politely. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Whether people like making lists depends on their personal preferences. Some may avoid lists because they prefer to rely on their good memory, while others might find lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has many repetitions and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain your preference. Avoid repeating phrases and check sentence completeness.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and durable. Unlike paper lists that can get wet or lost, digital lists are easy to carry and update anytime without needing pen and paper.

× So I prepare my list myself or my mother helps me to prepare a list.

✓ So I prepare my list myself or my mother helps me prepare the list.

The phrase 'helps me to prepare a list' is grammatically correct but can be more naturally expressed as 'helps me prepare the list'. Also, 'a list' should be consistent with 'my list' earlier, so 'the list' is better here for clarity.

× So uh, the list usually contains 20 to 30 items, uh.

✓ So, the list usually contains 20 to 30 items.

The sentence is mostly correct but removing filler words like 'uh' improves clarity and fluency.

× I do make a list for my work on sticky notes and arrange them properly on the table so I can whenever so that I cannot.

✓ I do make a list for my work on sticky notes and arrange them properly on the table so that I do not lose track.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'So I can whenever so that I cannot' is incomplete and confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I won't lose the track of work and I can more concentrate on the work, make the work look more organized and complete the task by the end of the day.

✓ I won't lose track of work, and I can concentrate more on the work, make it look more organized, and complete the task by the end of the day.

The phrase 'lose the track' should be 'lose track'. Also, 'can more concentrate' is incorrect; it should be 'can concentrate more'. The sentence is improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× And yes, it does work because it helps me not.

✓ And yes, it does work because it helps me a lot.

The phrase 'helps me not' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'helps me a lot' or 'helps me greatly' to convey the intended positive meaning.

× Making less completely depends on the person and individual's interest.

✓ Making lists completely depends on the person's individual interest.

'Making less' is a typo and should be 'making lists'. Also, 'person and individual's interest' is redundant; 'person's individual interest' is clearer.

× Few people don't like making a list because they are lazy or they have a very good memory part to remember all the things at once.

✓ Few people don't like making lists because they are lazy or they have a very good memory to remember all the things at once.

'Making a list' should be plural 'making lists' to generalize. 'Memory part' is incorrect; it should be 'memory' alone.

× I like to P make a list on my phone because if I make a list on paper and if it rains the paper may get wet and if it's in my phone then I can use it and there there would be no need of pen and paper.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because if I make a list on paper and it rains, the paper may get wet, but if it's on my phone, then I can use it and there would be no need for pen and paper.

'Like to P make' contains a typo and should be 'like to make'. 'Need of pen and paper' is incorrect; it should be 'need for pen and paper'. Also, 'if it's in my phone' should be 'if it's on my phone'.

× Every time there would be need to look for paper and pen and it I can carry it anywhere with.

✓ Every time, I would need to look for paper and pen, but with my phone, I can carry it anywhere.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.