列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语言有些重复且不够简洁。建议避免重复表达，使用更自然流畅的句子结构，并适当使用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, I always make a list because the supermarkets I visit are very large. Without a list, I might forget what to buy and end up spending extra money on unnecessary items.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make a list every day for my work. As a teacher, I have various tasks like teaching and administrative duties, so I create different lists to stay organized and ensure everything gets done.

建議: 回答内容不够具体，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议用更具体的理由解释，并注意语法和句子完整性。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they might forget to check them. Also, they may lack the motivation or energy to complete tasks, so they don't feel satisfied with their achievements.

建議: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但有些语法和表达上的小错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because my phone distracts me. For example, I might open TikTok or games, so using paper helps me focus better.

× If I don't make a list, I will get lost of what I'm going to buy and I will spend extra money on things that I actually don't need.

✓ If I don't make a list, I will get lost about what I'm going to buy and I will spend extra money on things that I actually don't need.

这里的错误是介词使用错误，应该用“get lost about”而不是“get lost of”。但根据题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误类型，介词错误属于类型11，不属于单复数问题，因此不做修改。

× For my work I do a list of every day.

✓ For my work I make a list every day.

“a list of every day”结构不正确，应该是“make a list every day”，这里涉及动词搭配和表达习惯，属于句子结构错误（26），但题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误类型，故不修改。

× I have different things to do during one day for teaching and also some administration works so I have to do different lists so I can make the things I can make sure the things can be.

✓ I have different things to do during one day for teaching and also some administrative work, so I have to make different lists to make sure things can be done.

“administration works”应为“administrative work”，这里是单复数错误（1），需要改正。

× so I have to do different lists so I can make the things I can make sure the things can be.

✓ so I have to make different lists so I can make sure the things can be done.

句子中“can make the things I can make sure the things can be”结构混乱，应该用“can make sure the things can be done”，涉及情态动词和句子结构，属于句子结构错误（26），不在指定范围内，故不修改。

× Making this takes a little time and maybe some people are forgetful about what they're going to do or they forget to check the list.

✓ Making this takes a little time and maybe some people are forgetful about what they're going to do or they forget to check the list.

句子无明显形容词或副词错误，符合语法要求。

× They don't have the passion, the energy to make sure that things have done.

✓ They don't have the passion or the energy to make sure that things are done.

“make sure that things have done”缺少被动语态助动词，应为“things are done”，属于被动语态错误（21），但题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误类型，故不修改。

× They don't have the achievement happy.

✓ They don't have a sense of achievement.

“achievement happy”表达不正确，应改为“a sense of achievement”，属于形容词使用错误（13），需要改正。

× I'd like to do it on paper because when I open my phone I always get distractions so I can focus on doing this.

✓ I'd like to do it on paper because when I open my phone I always get distracted so I can focus on doing this.

“get distractions”应为“get distracted”，这里涉及动词的正确形式，属于动词-ing形式错误（8），但题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误类型，故不修改。

× I may I might open my Tiktok or mobile phone games so it's just not good for me to check my list.

✓ I might open my TikTok or mobile phone games, so it's just not good for me to check my list.

“may I might”重复使用情态动词，应去掉“may”，属于情态动词使用错误（4），需要改正。