列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta efektif. Misalnya, gunakan 'I don't make a list when I go shopping because I find it hard to remember everything well' untuk membuat jawaban lebih jelas dan natural.

範例: No, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I find it hard to remember everything well, so I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

建議: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak lengkap. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan struktur yang baik. Misalnya, jelaskan apakah membuat daftar membantu atau tidak dan berikan alasan yang spesifik.

範例: No, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer to focus on tasks that interest me, which helps me stay motivated and productive.

建議: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan alasan yang lebih jelas serta spesifik. Hindari pengulangan dan buat jawaban lebih natural dan efektif.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and follow their interests rather than sticking to a fixed plan.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan lengkap. Jelaskan keuntungan menggunakan ponsel dengan kata-kata yang tepat dan alami.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easy to access, edit, and I don't have to rewrite it every time.

× No, I don't because when I goes to shopping or buy something I never make a list because I can't remember everything so well.

✓ No, I don't because when I go shopping or buy something I never make a list because I can't remember everything so well.

The verb 'goes' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'go'. Also, 'goes to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena subjek 'I' harus diikuti oleh bentuk kata kerja dasar tanpa 's' dalam present tense.

× No, I do not make a list for my work. I totally S. Doing my work from something that I like. For example, I like to learn skins, so I.

✓ No, I do not make a list for my work. I totally enjoy doing my work based on something that I like. For example, I like to learn skills, so I do.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains unclear fragments like 'I totally S.' and 'I like to learn skins'. The word 'skins' is likely a typo for 'skills'. The sentence structure needs to be corrected for clarity and completeness. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena kalimat tidak lengkap dan penggunaan kata yang salah, sehingga perlu diperbaiki agar jelas dan benar.

× I don't know why some people do not like making a list, but from my point of view for me, why did I do not making a list? It's because I prefer to work based on my interests.

✓ I don't know why some people do not like making a list, but from my point of view, I do not make a list because I prefer to work based on my interests.

The phrase 'why did I do not making a list?' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. It should be rephrased to 'I do not make a list'. Also, 'for me' is redundant after 'from my point of view'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan frasa yang salah dan redundansi dalam kalimat.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I make a list from my phone, it's so easy to sell, easy to see and I do not have to write it again. So just.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I make a list on my phone, it's so easy to use, easy to see, and I do not have to write it again.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect in 'make a list from my phone'; it should be 'on my phone'. Also, 'easy to sell' is likely a mistake for 'easy to use'. The sentence ending 'So just.' is incomplete and should be omitted. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan preposisi yang salah dan kata yang tidak tepat dalam konteks kalimat.