列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse est claire et directe, mais vous pouvez l'améliorer en ajoutant des détails spécifiques pour la rendre plus naturelle et intéressante. Par exemple, expliquez pourquoi vous faites une liste ou comment cela vous aide.

範例: Yes, I often make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

建議: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Essayez de répondre directement à la question avec une phrase claire, puis ajoutez des détails précis en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse cohérente.

範例: Yes, I often make a list for my work, and it usually helps me stay organized. However, sometimes unexpected tasks come up, so the list is not always perfect.

建議: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et manque de fluidité. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus simples et correctes, et donnez une raison claire avec un exemple si possible.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to stick to them regularly and stay disciplined.

建議: Votre réponse est incomplète et contient des erreurs. Essayez de formuler une réponse complète et claire, en expliquant pourquoi vous préférez un support plutôt qu'un autre, avec des détails précis.

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it helps me remember better. Sometimes, when I check my list on my phone, I get distracted and forget what I need to do.

× Yes, I often make a list for my work and sometime it's work, it's work, it's it's uh, and it's will be effect and sometime now, because when you have work, sometime you have.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work and sometimes it works, and it will be effective sometimes, because when you have work, sometimes you have to do it.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and verb forms, such as 'it's will be effect' which is incorrect. The correction uses 'it works' and 'it will be effective' to properly express ability and future effect. Modal verbs like 'will' should be followed by the base verb form, and 'effect' as a noun is replaced with the adjective 'effective' to fit the context.

× Yes, I often make a list for my work and sometime it's work, it's work, it's it's uh, and it's will be effect and sometime now, because when you have work, sometime you have.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work and sometimes it works, and it will be effective sometimes, because when you have work, sometimes you have to do it.

The word 'sometime' is incorrectly used; it should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Sometime' refers to an unspecified point in time, while 'sometimes' means 'occasionally' or 'at times'. Correct quantifiers improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Honestly I don't know, but maybe they can't be disciplined with this list and can they can't follow in this list in time regularly?

✓ Honestly, I don't know, but maybe they can't be disciplined with this list and can't follow this list regularly on time.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'can they can't' which is ungrammatical. The pronoun 'they' is misplaced and redundant. The correction removes the extra 'can' and rephrases for clarity. Also, 'follow in this list' is corrected to 'follow this list' as 'follow' does not require 'in' here.

× Honestly I don't know, but maybe they can't be disciplined with this list and can they can't follow in this list in time regularly?

✓ Honestly, I don't know, but maybe they can't be disciplined with this list and can't follow this list regularly on time.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'follow'. The verb 'follow' does not require 'in' when referring to a list. Removing 'in' corrects the prepositional error.

× In my opinion, I prefer to make a lease on paper because it's it's help me more than phone because sometime when I got my phone to check my list I forget and I use the.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to make a list on paper because it helps me more than the phone, because sometimes when I get my phone to check my list, I forget and I don't use it.

The word 'lease' is a wrong word choice; it should be 'list'. 'It's it's help me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me' to agree with the singular subject. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'got' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'get'. The sentence is completed for clarity and grammatical correctness.