列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容有些混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免无关内容，使用正确的语法和词汇。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to buy things spontaneously because it feels more relaxing and enjoyable for me.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，缺乏连贯性。建议使用简单句子清楚表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my homework. It helps me remember what to do and finish my tasks on time.

建議: 回答中出现了词汇错误（kidneys），表达不准确且句子结构混乱。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达原因，并避免无关内容。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome. They prefer to do things spontaneously, which feels more comfortable to them.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因，使用正确的语法和词汇。

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can see them clearly on my desk. Using my phone is less convenient for me.

× I don't like making list, I prefer to do everything as I please.

✓ I don't like making lists, I prefer to do everything as I please.

这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”，因为表达的是一般喜欢或不喜欢做“清单”，是复数的概念。

× monsters don't monster shop and can able to the payment for.

✓ monsters don't shop and cannot pay for it.

这里“can able to”是错误的表达，正确用法是“can”或“be able to”，不能合用。且“monster shop”不合适，应为“shop”。

× I usually make a list from my word, sometimes it's for my homework because in my school some homework is need to do very bad.

✓ I usually make a list from my work, sometimes it's for my homework because at my school some homework needs to be done urgently.

“from my word”应为“from my work”；“in my school”应为“at my school”；“is need to do very bad”语法错误，改为“needs to be done urgently”更合适。

× And if you don't make a list and you cannot do it, finish it at times.

✓ And if you don't make a list, you cannot finish it on time.

“cannot do it, finish it at times”表达不清，且“at times”用法错误，应为“on time”表示按时完成。

× One of the reason is there's some people don't like making kidneys that is more troublesome and they prefer to do everything as they please.

✓ One of the reasons is that some people don't like making lists because it is more troublesome and they prefer to do everything as they please.

“reason”应为复数“reasons”；“there's some people”应为“there are some people”；“making kidneys”应为“making lists”；“that is”应为“because it is”。

× But if I just need to make a list for what is so tremendous.

✓ But I just need to make a list when it is really important.

原句结构不完整且“for what is so tremendous”表达不清，改为完整句子且表达明确。

× I prepare to make a list on the paper because when I do the work I can put the paper on the desk and I can see it more clean, but if at home I need to open the phone to see my list is not confirmed to me, I don't prepare for this.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I do the work I can put the paper on the desk and see it more clearly, but at home if I need to open the phone to see my list, it is not convenient for me, so I don't prefer this.

“prepare to make a list on the paper”应为“prefer to make a list on paper”；“see it more clean”应为“see it more clearly”；“not confirmed to me”表达错误，应为“not convenient for me”；“I don't prepare for this”应为“I don't prefer this”。