列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yeah, I usually make a list when I go to the shop. It can help me remind me what I will actually need so I I don't need to pay extra money for the snack or something else.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I am a organized people. I always do a schedule before I start to work, so it's like a security defense. Make sure everything is in plan and it can be more efficiency and effective.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Maybe they're just easy going and they think rotten is very fun. They like to do whatever they want in that moment and can feel more freedom or more creative because if he think about something he just do it, not need to plan maybe.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
It's really depends because for the working hour study schedule I always put on the paper it's not easy to change it. But for shopping I think on the mobile phone we're more convenient and easy to check.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 70.0建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但有语法错误和重复，如“help me remind me”和“so I I”。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。
範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I really need, so I don't end up buying unnecessary snacks or other items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a organized people”，以及表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的冠词和单复数形式，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。
範例: Yes, I am an organized person. I always make a schedule before I start working to ensure everything is planned, which makes my work more efficient and effective.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中有词汇使用错误，如“rotten”，且句子结构混乱。建议使用准确的词汇表达观点，并注意主谓一致和时态。
範例: Maybe some people are easy-going and enjoy spontaneity. They prefer to do whatever they feel like at the moment, which gives them a sense of freedom and creativity without planning.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“It’s really depends”，且表达不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致，使用连贯的句子，并明确表达偏好。
範例: It really depends. For my work and study schedule, I prefer paper because it's more stable and not easy to change. But for shopping lists, I find using my phone more convenient and easy to check.
文法
× Yes, I am a organized people.
✓ Yes, I am an organized person.
这里的 'people' 是复数形式，但句子主语是单数 'I'，应使用单数 'person'。同时，'organized' 前的冠词应为 'an'，因为 'organized' 以元音音素开头。
× Maybe they're just easy going and they think rotten is very fun.
✓ Maybe they're just easy-going and they think relaxing is very fun.
'rotten' 意为腐烂的，不符合语境，应使用形容词或动名词表达轻松、放松的意思，如 'relaxing'。另外，'easy going' 应为连字符连接的形容词 'easy-going'。
× They like to do whatever they want in that moment and can feel more freedom or more creative because if he think about something he just do it, not need to plan maybe.
✓ They like to do whatever they want in that moment and can feel more freedom or be more creative because if they think about something, they just do it, and don't need to plan maybe.
句中代词不一致，前面用 'they'，后面错误使用 'he'，应保持代词一致。动词 'think' 和 'do' 需加第三人称单数形式或与主语一致。
× It's really depends because for the working hour study schedule I always put on the paper it's not easy to change it.
✓ It really depends because for the working hour study schedule I always put it on paper; it's not easy to change it.
'put on the paper' 中 'the' 不必要，通常说 'put on paper'。另外，句子结构需调整以更通顺。
× But for shopping I think on the mobile phone we're more convenient and easy to check.
✓ But for shopping, I think using the mobile phone is more convenient and easy to check.
'we're' 应为 'it's' 或 'is'，因为主语是 'using the mobile phone'。另外，'think on' 不合适，应改为 'think using' 或 'think that using'。
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