列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Probeer je antwoord natuurlijker en grammaticaal correct te maken. Gebruik een duidelijke hoofdzin en ondersteunende details zonder overbodige woorden. Bijvoorbeeld, zeg: "No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to rely on my memory."

範例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to rely on my memory. This way, I can be more flexible and spontaneous when I shop.

建議: Zorg voor een duidelijke structuur en grammatica. Begin met een direct antwoord en leg daarna uit hoe het maken van lijsten je helpt. Bijvoorbeeld: "I don't work yet, but I study. I make lists for my lessons, which help me organize and improve my learning."

範例: I don't work yet, but I study. I make lists for my lessons, which help me organize and improve my learning. This method keeps me focused and efficient.

建議: Formuleer je mening duidelijk en gebruik verbindingswoorden om je argumenten te ondersteunen. Bijvoorbeeld: "Some people dislike making lists because they see it as extra work and prefer to rely on their memory."

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they see it as extra work. They believe their brain can handle tasks without writing them down, so they find lists unnecessary.

建議: Gebruik een duidelijke en samenhangende zinstructuur. Leg uit waarom je de voorkeur geeft aan papier met specifieke redenen. Bijvoorbeeld: "I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the aesthetic and find writing by hand helps me remember better."

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the aesthetic and find that writing by hand helps me remember things better. It also feels more personal and satisfying.

× No, I don't make a list when I shopping because I love at least my brain.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I am shopping because I love at least my brain.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The correct structure is 'I am shopping' instead of 'I shopping'. This is necessary to indicate an action happening currently or habitually in this context.

× I don't like the list in paper list in telephone notes application.

✓ I don't like the list on paper or in the telephone notes application.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'paper list'. The correct preposition is 'on' for something written on paper. Also, 'in telephone notes application' should be 'in the telephone notes application' to specify the application. Using correct prepositions clarifies the meaning.

× Actually, I'm not working, but I'm studying, yes, and I'm pleased for my study.

✓ Actually, I'm not working, but I'm studying, yes, and I'm pleased with my study.

The phrase 'pleased for my study' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'with' after 'pleased' to indicate satisfaction. This is a common collocation in English.

× I'm list for my lessons.

✓ I make a list for my lessons.

The sentence lacks a verb and uses 'I'm list' which is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'I make a list'. This corrects the singular/plural and sentence structure issues by adding the verb 'make'.

× It's it's improve my improve my classes, improve my lessons.

✓ It improves my classes and my lessons.

The original sentence is repetitive and lacks proper structure. Using 'It improves' correctly applies the third person singular verb form and connects the ideas clearly.

× Because I think. Their opinion is extra job.

✓ Because I think their opinion is an extra job.

The sentence is fragmented and 'Their opinion' is unclear. Combining the sentences and adding the article 'an' before 'extra job' improves clarity and grammar.

× Oh my brain is working. No I don't need to list something there.

✓ Oh, my brain is working. No, I don't need to list anything there.

The phrase 'list something' is awkward; 'list anything' is more appropriate in negative sentences. Also, commas after interjections improve readability.

× Lists something is things stupid for people.

✓ Listing things is stupid for people.

The phrase 'Lists something is things stupid' is ungrammatical. Using the gerund 'Listing' as the subject and simplifying the sentence corrects the structure.

× I prefer make a list on my paper, on my notebook because I love this aesthetic and I love I'm crazy now writing something writing I don't know, lessons, notes and more.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper, in my notebook because I love this aesthetic and I'm crazy about writing something, I don't know, lessons, notes and more.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb ('to make'). Also, 'on my paper' should be 'on paper' and 'on my notebook' should be 'in my notebook' because we write in notebooks. The phrase 'I love I'm crazy now writing' is corrected to 'I love this aesthetic and I'm crazy about writing' for clarity and grammar.