列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like "it's 6 to my mind". Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

範例: Yes, I often make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I can easily check my list to avoid forgetting anything important.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and adding linking words for coherence. Also, try to provide a bit more detail to support your points.

範例: Yes, I try to make a list for my work, although not always. It works well because it helps me perform tasks in order and manage my time effectively.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons logically. Also, avoid vague phrases like "some people it find".

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it. Moreover, they may find it tedious to write down tasks before doing them.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is eco-friendly and very convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I can easily check my list anywhere without needing paper.

× Making a list help me to remember things.

✓ Making a list helps me to remember things.

The subject 'Making a list' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number. In English, singular third-person subjects take verbs ending with 's' in the present tense.

× When I go to a supermarket it's 6 to my mind what things I need to buy

✓ When I go to a supermarket, it comes to my mind what things I need to buy

The phrase 'it's 6 to my mind' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'it comes to my mind' to indicate that something occurs or appears in one's thoughts. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× Some people don't like making list because they are not habitual of making list

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are not habitual of making lists

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. In English, countable nouns in general statements are often plural.

× and some people it find.

✓ and some people find it.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly placed before the verb. The correct word order is subject 'some people' followed by the verb 'find' and then the object 'it'.

× And some people find it heavy to make a list to first note down things and then to perform it.

✓ And some people find it difficult to make a list, to first note down things and then to perform them.

The word 'heavy' is incorrectly used; 'difficult' is more appropriate to express the challenge. Also, 'perform it' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so 'perform them' is correct.

× I prefer to make list on phone because it is eco friendly

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is eco-friendly

The noun 'list' needs an article 'a' because it is singular and countable. Also, 'phone' should be preceded by 'my' to specify possession. 'Eco friendly' should be hyphenated as 'eco-friendly' when used as an adjective.