列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and clear. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples. For instance, explain briefly why making a list helps you and relate it clearly to your memory issue.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I have a poor memory, which might be genetic since my mother does the same. This helps me avoid forgetting important ingredients when I go to the market.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain how making a list helps you stay organized. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete thoughts.

範例: Yes, I make lists and timetables for my work because they help me stay organized. When I follow my schedule, I can focus better and complete tasks on time.

建議: Avoid negative judgments like calling people lazy. Instead, explain reasons clearly and use linking words to structure your answer. Also, complete your thoughts and avoid unfinished sentences.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. Instead, they prefer to act spontaneously without fixed goals, which works better for their lifestyle.

建議: Complete your sentences and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid grammatical mistakes. Provide specific reasons why paper lists work better for you.

範例: I definitely prefer making lists on paper and putting them on the wall because my phone has many distracting notifications. This helps me stay focused and confident in completing my tasks.

× Well, actually I make a list when I shop because I have very weak memory and it's maybe a genetic problem because also my mother make a list she forgot a lot of ingredients when he when she go to the market and came with something.

✓ Well, actually I make a list when I shop because I have a very weak memory and it may be a genetic problem because also my mother makes a list; she forgets a lot of ingredients when she goes to the market and comes back with something else.

The errors include singular/plural agreement and subject-verb agreement. 'Memory' is a countable noun here and needs an article 'a'. 'It's maybe' should be 'it may be' for correct modal verb usage. 'My mother make' should be 'my mother makes' to agree with the third person singular subject. 'She forgot' should be 'she forgets' to maintain present tense consistency. 'He when she go' is incorrect; 'she goes' is correct for third person singular present tense. 'Came' should be 'comes' to keep present tense consistent.

× Actually, from my perspective, I think that making a list or schedule or even a timetable make them more organized and arranged.

✓ Actually, from my perspective, I think that making a list, a schedule, or even a timetable makes one more organized and arranged.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list, a schedule, or even a timetable' considered as one activity. Also, 'them' is incorrect as the subject is singular; 'one' is more appropriate here.

× So if I will make my timetable, I will obey it and my thought will be around.

✓ So if I make my timetable, I will obey it and my thoughts will be focused.

In conditional sentences of the first type, the 'if' clause should use the present tense, not 'will'. Therefore, 'if I will make' should be 'if I make'. Also, 'my thought will be around' is unclear; 'my thoughts will be focused' is a clearer expression.

× From my perspective, I think some people are very lazy to make a list. They think maybe they're wasting their time, so they just go in spontaneous way to do some things in their life without target or without goals to do it.

✓ From my perspective, I think some people are too lazy to make a list. They think maybe they're wasting their time, so they just go in a spontaneous way to do some things in their life without a target or goals to do them.

The phrase 'very lazy to make' should be 'too lazy to make' for correct expression. 'Go in spontaneous way' needs an article: 'go in a spontaneous way'. 'Without target or without goals' should be 'without a target or goals'. 'To do it' is unclear; 'to do them' refers correctly to 'things'.

× Definitely I prefer to make a list on a paper and tie it or put it in the wall because on the phone there is more distracted applications or notification that I will receive, so that will make me less confident because I will do my.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to make a list on paper and tie it or put it on the wall because on the phone there are more distracting applications or notifications that I will receive, so that will make me less confident because I will do my work.

The phrase 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' (no article). 'Put it in the wall' should be 'put it on the wall' because we put things on surfaces. 'More distracted applications' should be 'more distracting applications' as the applications cause distraction. 'Notification' should be plural 'notifications' to match 'applications'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'I will do my'; adding 'work' completes the thought.