列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear reason for not making a list when shopping. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I find it inconvenient to check it while walking around. Instead, I prefer to remember what I need or buy things spontaneously.

建議: Focus on giving a direct answer first, then support it with clear and relevant details. Avoid confusing or unclear phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence and try to use more precise vocabulary.

範例: I don't usually make a list for my work. However, I have noticed that many people I follow on social media use lists to organize their tasks, and it seems to help them work more efficiently.

建議: Complete your sentences and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid vague expressions and explain clearly why some people dislike making lists.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it's unnecessary and it can make them feel more stressed by reminding them of too many tasks.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to compare the two options and provide specific reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to access and I don't have to worry about losing the paper list or misplacing it.

× When I go for shopping, I don't make a list when I shop.

✓ When I go shopping, I don't make a list when I shop.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' because 'go' is followed by the verb in -ing form without 'for'. This is a common English expression for indicating the activity of shopping.

× because when I go I won't have the time to look at my list because it will make me feel quite.

✓ because when I go I won't have the time to look at my list because it will make me feel quiet.

The word 'quite' is an adverb meaning 'completely' or 'very', but the intended meaning here is 'quiet', an adjective meaning 'silent' or 'calm'. Using 'quiet' correctly conveys the feeling described.

× I don't make a list for work but from my observations is that most people in social media that I love too, that I follow and love to watch their daily routine is that they make list for their works and it actually goes so slim and well for them.

✓ I don't make a list for work, but from my observations, most people on social media that I love to follow and watch their daily routines make lists for their work, and it actually goes very smoothly and well for them.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: missing commas, incorrect prepositions ('in social media' should be 'on social media'), incorrect plural forms ('make list' should be 'make lists', 'works' should be 'work'), and awkward phrasing ('goes so slim and well' is incorrect; 'goes very smoothly and well' is appropriate). Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people don't like making this because they find it unreasonable to make a list, and they will find it more stressful because it will make them feel.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it unreasonable to make a list, and they find it more stressful because it makes them feel uneasy.

The phrase 'making this' is vague and incorrect; it should be 'making lists' to refer clearly to the activity. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'feel' without specifying how they feel; adding 'uneasy' or a similar adjective completes the thought. Additionally, 'will find' is changed to 'find' to maintain present tense consistency.

× For me, making a list is way better on my phone because when making the list on my phone it's actually more easy to get to it and open it, while on paper it might be a little like losing it or like putting it in a place that won't be.

✓ For me, making a list is much better on my phone because when I make the list on my phone, it's actually easier to access and open it, while on paper it might be easy to lose or put in a place where it won't be found.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'easier'. Also, 'when making the list' is better as 'when I make the list' for clarity. The ending 'a place that won't be' is incomplete; it should be 'a place where it won't be found' to complete the idea. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.