列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız doğal ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğru yapmak için, 'I am not the type of person who makes lists or plans' gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltarak cevabınızı daha etkili hale getirebilirsiniz.

範例: No, I am not the type of person who makes lists or plans. When I go shopping, I usually walk around and decide what to buy on the spot.

建議: Cevabınız açık ve mantıklı, ancak bağlaç kullanımı daha iyi olabilir. 'However' kelimesini kullanmanız iyi, fakat cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için 'because' gibi neden-sonuç bağlaçlarını da ekleyebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi biraz daha kısa ve net tutmaya çalışın.

範例: I don't usually make lists for work, but I think I should because it helps me stay organized. However, I often postpone tasks, which makes my work messy and stressful.

建議: Cevabınızda fikirlerinizi ifade etmişsiniz ancak daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. 'Because of that it is like impossible' yerine 'Therefore, it is impossible' gibi daha uygun bağlaçlar tercih edin. Ayrıca, 'I'm not like comfortable' ifadesi yerine 'I am not comfortable' demek daha doğrudur.

範例: People have different personalities, so it's impossible for everyone to do the same things. For example, I don't like making lists because I am not comfortable doing that.

建議: Cevabınız anlaşılır ancak bazı tekrarlar ve gereksiz kelimeler var. 'I think like' ve 'you can't like' gibi ifadeler yerine daha net ve kısa cümleler kurabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlenizi akıcı hale getirin.

範例: If I have to make a list, I prefer using my phone because it's easier to access and carry than a piece of paper. Therefore, the phone is a more convenient choice.

× No, actually I'm not the type of person that do list and plans.

✓ No, actually I'm not the type of person that does lists and plans.

The subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'does' instead of 'do'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'plans'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× So when I go shopping, I just walk around and and look, take a look at all the shopping places and just decide there what I'm gonna get.

✓ So when I go shopping, I just walk around and look, take a look at all the shopping places and just decide there what I'm going to get.

The phrase 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. Also, the repeated 'and' is a typographical error. This correction improves clarity and formality.

× Actually, I'm not the type of person who makes lists for work.

✓ Actually, I'm not the type of person who makes lists for work.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I think I should, especially when studying because it helps me stay organized and plan better.

✓ I think I should, especially when studying, because it helps me stay organized and plan better.

A comma is needed after 'studying' to separate the clauses properly. This is a punctuation issue related to sentence clarity.

× I think all people have different personalities, so because of that it is like impossible for every person to do the same thing.

✓ I think all people have different personalities, so because of that, it is impossible for every person to do the same thing.

The word 'like' is unnecessary and informal here; removing it improves clarity and formality. Also, a comma after 'that' improves sentence flow.

× For me, for example, I do not like making lists and I'm not like comfortable doing that.

✓ For me, for example, I do not like making lists and I'm not comfortable doing that.

The word 'like' is incorrectly used before 'comfortable'. It should be removed to correct the adverb usage.

× If I have to make a list, I prefer it to be on my phone because I think like it is more easy to access when it's in your phone because you can't like carry that piece of paper everywhere with you.

✓ If I have to make a list, I prefer it to be on my phone because I think it is easier to access when it's on your phone since you can't carry that piece of paper everywhere with you.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'easier'. Also, 'in your phone' should be 'on your phone'. The word 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.