列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте повторений и нечетких выражений, таких как "uh" и "2 don't write". Используйте связующие слова для логичности и добавьте конкретные детали.

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to rely on my memory. However, if I need to buy something important, I make sure to write it down to avoid forgetting it.

建議: Старайтесь избегать повторений и слов-паразитов, таких как "uh". Ответ должен быть более связным и конкретным, с использованием связующих слов для плавности.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me concentrate and stay focused. Moreover, it motivates me to complete tasks efficiently.

建議: Ответ звучит слишком обобщенно и негативно. Постарайтесь использовать более нейтральные и разнообразные выражения, а также добавьте связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously. Additionally, they may feel that lists limit their flexibility.

建議: Избегайте слов-паразитов и грамматических ошибок. Ответ должен быть более четким и связным, с использованием подходящих связующих слов и конкретных деталей.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing with a pen helps me concentrate better. It also makes it easier to remember my tasks compared to using my phone.

× I would say not because I don't like uh, the listing and I can remember everything what I need, so if it's really important I would definitely remember it.

✓ I would say not because I don't like uh, the listings and I can remember everything that I need, so if it's really important I would definitely remember it.

The word 'listing' should be plural 'listings' because it refers to the general activity of making lists, which is countable and plural in this context. Also, 'what' should be replaced with 'that' to correctly introduce the relative clause.

× So 2 don't write.

✓ So I don't write.

The number '2' is a typographical error and should be replaced with the pronoun 'I' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× it helps me more concentrated on my work and uh helps me focus only my uh work and it works really best and it can help me stay motivated.

✓ it helps me be more concentrated on my work and uh helps me focus only on my uh work and it works really best and it can help me stay motivated.

The phrase 'helps me more concentrated' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me be more concentrated' to use the correct verb form. Also, 'focus only my work' needs the preposition 'on' to be 'focus only on my work'.

× That's why they try to avoid making lists.

✓ That's why they try to avoid making lists.

No correction needed here; the pronoun usage is correct.

× I would say on paper because using, uh, when I use a pen, I feel more concentrated.

✓ I would say on paper because, uh, when I use a pen, I feel more concentrated.

The phrase 'because using, uh,' is incorrect and unnecessary; it should be removed for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That's why riding by a pen helps me to remember what I need and what I want is easily.

✓ That's why writing with a pen helps me to remember what I need and what I want easily.

'Riding' is a typo and should be 'writing'. Also, 'by a pen' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with a pen'. The phrase 'what I want is easily' is awkward and should be 'what I want easily'.

× So yeah, on paper is the best of.

✓ So yeah, on paper is the best option.

The phrase 'the best of' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'the best option' or 'the best choice' to complete the meaning.