列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a supporting detail using linking words.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and makes the process easier.

建議: Focus on clearer sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I make a list of my tasks from start to finish because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid vague expressions like 'a certain people'.

範例: Some people prefer not to make lists because they believe they can remember everything, and they think making lists wastes time.

建議: Use clearer sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to compare preferences and provide specific examples.

範例: I prefer to use both paper and my phone for making lists. For detailed projects or writing, I find paper and pen work best, but for daily chores, I usually use my phone.

× At prior I made a list for remember the things when I was go to the shop for shopping and it made me easy and comfortable.

✓ Previously, I made a list to remember the things when I went to the shop for shopping, and it made it easy and comfortable for me.

The sentence contains incorrect verb forms: 'was go' should be 'went' to correctly use the past tense of 'go'. Also, 'for remember' should be 'to remember' to use the correct infinitive form. Using 'Previously' is more natural than 'At prior'. These corrections ensure proper past tense usage and correct verb forms.

× At prior I made a list for remember the things when I was go to the shop for shopping and it made me easy and comfortable.

✓ Previously, I made a list to remember the things when I went to the shop for shopping, and it made it easy and comfortable for me.

The phrase 'for remember' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' before the verb 'remember' to form the infinitive. Also, 'made me easy and comfortable' is awkward; it should be 'made it easy and comfortable for me' to correctly express the effect on the speaker.

× I usually make a list of my work from start to end because it is easy process and I when I do my work I can easily remember the things and do my work very comfortably.

✓ I usually make a list of my work from start to finish because it is an easy process, and when I do my work, I can easily remember the things and do my work very comfortably.

The phrase 'from start to end' is less natural than 'from start to finish'. Also, 'easy process' needs an article 'an' before it. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× A certain people just likes to making the list for their busy schedule.

✓ Certain people just like making lists for their busy schedules.

'A certain people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also, 'likes' should be 'like' to agree with plural 'people'. 'To making' is incorrect; it should be 'making' without 'to'. 'The list' should be plural 'lists' to match the general meaning, and 'schedule' should be plural 'schedules' to agree with 'people'.

× A certain people just likes to making the list for their busy schedule.

✓ Certain people just like making lists for their busy schedules.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to'. Therefore, 'to making' is incorrect; it should be 'making'.

× A certain people just likes to making the list for their busy schedule.

✓ Certain people just like making lists for their busy schedules.

The verb 'likes' is incorrect because the subject 'people' is plural; the correct verb form is 'like'.

× They are more likely to do work without making list because they remember everything and they think it is a wastage of time.

✓ They are more likely to do work without making a list because they remember everything and think it is a waste of time.

'Making list' requires an article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'wastage' is less common in this context; 'waste' is more appropriate. The second 'they' before 'think' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother flow.

× They are more likely to do work without making list because they remember everything and they think it is a wastage of time.

✓ They are more likely to do work without making a list because they remember everything and think it is a waste of time.

The repeated use of 'they' before 'think' is redundant and can be omitted for better sentence flow.

× I prefer to make a list on both because for projects or novels I can use paper or pen works best.

✓ I prefer to make a list on both because for projects or novels, using paper or pen works best.

The phrase 'paper or pen works best' is awkward; it should be 'using paper or pen works best'. Also, a comma after 'novels' improves readability.

× But on mobile phones I use to make a list because for for daily chores.

✓ But on mobile phones, I use them to make lists for daily chores.

The phrase 'I use to make a list' is incomplete; it should specify what is used, e.g., 'I use them'. Also, 'for for' is a typo and should be 'for'. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to match general usage. Adding a comma after 'phones' improves clarity.