列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: No, I don't often make a list when I shop because I usually only go to the store when I know exactly what I need to buy.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời câu hỏi khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'bake the list' thay vì 'make a list'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of tasks I need to complete each day, especially for work and study. This helps me stay organized and manage my responsibilities effectively. For example, when I write down my tasks, I find it easier to manage my time and avoid forgetting important deadlines.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng ví dụ cụ thể, đồng thời tránh những từ không liên quan hoặc sai ngữ cảnh.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. They prefer to decide what to do in the moment instead of following a fixed plan.

建議: Bạn đã sử dụng từ sai ('floor' thay vì 'phone') và câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và liên kết các ý bằng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. For example, I always carry my phone with me, so I can easily add or check items anytime. Also, using apps allows me to edit my list quickly without needing paper.

× No, it's not often because. Only go to the store where have things to buy.

✓ No, not often because I only go to the store where there are things to buy.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject in the second part. Adding 'I' as the subject and 'there are' to indicate existence corrects the sentence structure and clarifies meaning.

× Only go to the store where have things to buy.

✓ I only go to the store where there are things to buy.

The phrase 'where have things to buy' is incorrect because 'have' needs a subject. Using 'there are' correctly expresses the existence of things to buy at the store.

× Yes, I usually bake the list of tasks I need to complete each day, especially for work study.

✓ Yes, I usually make the list of tasks I need to complete each day, especially for work or study.

The verb 'bake' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'make' when referring to creating a list. Also, 'for work study' is unclear; 'for work or study' is more appropriate.

× They tell me to stay online and pre authorize my responsibilities effectively.

✓ It helps me to stay organized and prioritize my responsibilities effectively.

The pronoun 'They' is unclear and incorrect here. The sentence should refer to the list or the action helping the speaker, so 'It helps me' is appropriate.

× For example, when I write down my tasks, I feel it's easier to manage my time and avoid forgetting important deadlines.

✓ For example, when I write down my tasks, I find it easier to manage my time and avoid forgetting important deadlines.

Using 'find' instead of 'feel' is more natural when expressing the result of an action. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I think we are.

✓ I think so.

The phrase 'I think we are' is incomplete and unclear. 'I think so' is the correct expression to agree or confirm a previous statement.

× Some people don't like making this because they feel restricted by Harry to follow a fixed plan.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted by having to follow a fixed plan.

'Making this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer. 'Restricted by Harry' is incorrect; it should be 'restricted by having to' to express obligation.

× For example, they might find these two bridges.

✓ For example, they might find this too stressful.

The original sentence is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Find this too stressful' fits the context of disliking fixed plans.

× Uh, I prefer to make this on my floor because it is more convenient and possible.

✓ Uh, I prefer to make this on my phone because it is more convenient and practical.

'Floor' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'phone'. Also, 'possible' is incorrect here; 'practical' or 'convenient' fits better.

× For example, I will always carry my floor with me and so I can easily add or track items every time.

✓ For example, I always carry my phone with me so I can easily add or track items anytime.

Again, 'floor' should be 'phone'. 'Every time' is better expressed as 'anytime' in this context.

× Also, using apps allow me to edit my list quickly and without reading paper.

✓ Also, using apps allows me to edit my list quickly and without using paper.

'Apps' is plural, so the verb should be 'allow' or 'allows' depending on subject. Here, 'using apps' is singular, so 'allows' is correct. 'Without reading paper' is incorrect; it should be 'without using paper'.