列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、繰り返しがあり、文の構造が単純です。より効果的にするために、理由を明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I sometimes forget what to buy. Therefore, I check the list before going to the store to make sure I don't miss anything.

建議: 文法の誤りと意味の不明瞭さが目立ちます。明確な主語と述語を使い、理由を具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。接続詞も適切に使うことが重要です。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember many tasks. Therefore, it improves my efficiency and reduces stress.

建議: 繰り返しが多く、文が不完全です。理由を明確にし、簡潔で論理的な文章を作る練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って文を繋げることも意識してください。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they often don't follow them, which makes the effort seem pointless.

建議: 言葉の選び方と文の流れを改善しましょう。曖昧な表現や繰り返しを避け、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it when I go out, so it's convenient and I won't lose it like paper lists.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I occasionally forget what I should buy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I occasionally forget what I should buy.

This sentence is grammatically correct and uses the present tense appropriately to describe habitual actions.

× So I make a list and I see the list before shopping.

✓ So I make a list and I check the list before shopping.

The verb 'see' is not the best choice here; 'check' better conveys the action of reviewing the list. The tense is correct, but word choice can improve clarity.

× Yes, I think so because I'm making a risk is remembering a lot of things, so it is good for my brain.

✓ Yes, I think so because making a list helps me remember a lot of things, so it is good for my brain.

The original sentence has structural issues and unclear phrasing. 'I'm making a risk is remembering' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× So I usually therefore I usually make a list.

✓ Therefore, I usually make a list.

The original sentence is redundant and awkward. Removing the repeated phrase improves clarity and maintains correct present tense usage.

× I think many people don't want to spend a lot of time and many people think, I think so.

✓ I think many people don't want to spend a lot of time, and I think so too.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. Adding 'too' clarifies agreement, and restructuring improves flow. Modal verbs are used correctly here.

× I think that many people don't follow the list, so they can not, they can't.

✓ I think that many people don't follow the list, so they can't.

The phrase 'can not' is split unnecessarily. Using the contraction 'can't' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× I think phone is a better than paper because uh, many people usually bring phone because phone is necessary to uh going outside.

✓ I think the phone is better than paper because many people usually bring their phone since it is necessary when going outside.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'phone' when referring to a specific item. Also, possessive pronouns and prepositions are corrected for natural expression.

× However paper is not U usually on the paper may be lost.

✓ However, paper is not usually carried, and it may be lost.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and awkward phrasing. Correcting pronouns and sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.