列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сіздің жауабыңыз табиғи, бірақ кейбір сөйлемдерде грамматикалық қателер бар және жауап сәл ұзақ әрі қайталанатын. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру сөздері арқылы ұсыныңыз. Мысалы, "I don't make a list when I shop because I find it unnecessary. Instead, I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I see something I like."

範例: I don't make a list when I shop because I find it unnecessary. Instead, I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I see something I like. This way, shopping feels more enjoyable and less stressful.

建議: Жауабыңыз нақты, бірақ грамматикалық қателер бар және жауапты кеңейтуге болады. Мысалы, "I don't have a job currently, so I don't make lists for work. However, I think making lists can be very helpful for organizing tasks."

範例: I don't have a job currently, so I don't make lists for work. However, I think making lists can be very helpful for organizing tasks and improving productivity.

建議: Жауабыңыз түсінікті, бірақ сөйлемдер қысқа және қайталанатын. Байланыстыру сөздерін қолданып, жауапты толықтырыңыз. Мысалы, "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to live spontaneously. They enjoy adventures and like to see what happens without planning."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to live spontaneously. They enjoy adventures and like to see what happens without planning, which makes life more exciting for them.

建議: Жауабыңыз жақсы, бірақ кейбір грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлемдерді байланыстыру қажет. Мысалы, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it saves time and I can check it anytime. Also, I can mark items immediately, which is very convenient."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it saves time and I can check it anytime. Also, I can mark items immediately, which is very convenient and helps me stay organized.

× No, I do not make a list when I shop because I found it silly.

✓ No, I do not make a list when I shop because I find it silly.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do not make' with past tense 'found'. To maintain tense consistency, 'found' should be changed to present tense 'find' because the action is habitual.

× Uh, I just go and I see it, I like it and I got it just easy.

✓ Uh, I just go and I see it, I like it and I get it just easily.

The verb 'got' is past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so 'get' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'easy' should be 'easily' as it modifies the verb 'get'.

× Uh, no, I don't have a work, I don't have a job, I'm unemployed.

✓ Uh, no, I don't have work, I don't have a job, I'm unemployed.

The word 'work' is uncountable here and does not need the article 'a'. Saying 'a work' is incorrect.

× Because some people like living without planning. Like maybe they like adventures.

✓ Because some people like living without planning, maybe they like adventures.

The original sentences are fragments. Combining them into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Just go and what will see what will happen.

✓ Just go and we will see what will happen.

The phrase 'what will see' is incorrect; it should be 'we will see' to indicate the subject performing the action.

× I do prefer to make a list on my phone because it takes less time and I can watch it whenever I want and immediately mark it.

✓ I do prefer to make a list on my phone because it takes less time and I can check it whenever I want and immediately mark it.

The verb 'watch' is incorrect in this context; 'check' is more appropriate when referring to reviewing a list.

× It's comfortable and don't take time.

✓ It's comfortable and doesn't take time.

The subject 'It' requires the verb form 'doesn't' for third person singular; 'don't' is incorrect here.