列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'go strapping' thay vì 'go shopping' và 'it's make me' thay vì 'it helps me'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp lại ý giống nhau trong câu trả lời.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'stay on the easiest' và 'In other purity'. Bạn nên sử dụng các cụm từ chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn. Hơn nữa, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. For example, it allows me to manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties, which improves my productivity.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'don't have time to live or for somebody'. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time or they prefer to rely on their memory. They believe they can focus better without writing things down.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I prefer make a list' thay vì 'I prefer to make a list' và 'to everywhere' thay vì 'everywhere'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc đúng và tránh lặp lại ý giống nhau.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, if I forget something, I can easily check my list and know what to do next.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go strapping because it's make me remember what I want to buy and don't forget it.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I want to buy and not forget it.

The word 'strapping' is incorrect; the correct gerund form of the verb 'shop' is 'shopping'. Also, 'it's make me' should be 'it helps me' to agree with the singular subject and correct verb form.

× So I usually make a list when I go shop.

✓ So I usually make a list when I go shopping.

The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form 'shopping' to indicate the activity. 'Go shop' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it's helped me stay on the easiest and focus for example my listening talks.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay on task and focus, for example, on my listening talks.

'It's helped me' is incorrect here; the present tense 'it helps me' fits better. Also, 'stay on the easiest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stay on task'. The sentence also needs prepositions for clarity.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it's helped me stay on the easiest and focus for example my listening talks.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay on task and focus, for example, on my listening talks.

The phrase 'stay on the easiest' is incorrect; it should be 'stay on task'. Also, 'focus for example my listening talks' lacks the preposition 'on' before 'my listening talks'.

× In other purity, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.

✓ In other words, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.

The phrase 'In other purity' is incorrect and should be 'In other words' to express the intended meaning.

× However, making a little differently improve my productivity.

✓ However, making a few changes improves my productivity.

'Making a little differently' is incorrect. The phrase should be 'making a few changes' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with the singular subject.

× Normally they don't like or they don't have time to live or for somebody.

✓ Normally, they don't like it or they don't have time to live for themselves or for somebody else.

The sentence is unclear and lacks proper pronouns. 'Like it' clarifies what they don't like. 'Live for themselves or for somebody else' clarifies the meaning.

× They can remember what they have to do and they focus better.

✓ They can remember what they have to do and focus better.

The second 'they' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother sentence flow.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because I'll carry my phone to everywhere I go, so when I forgot something I'll open my phone and take what I need to do next.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere I go, so when I forget something, I'll open my phone and see what I need to do next.

'Prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. 'I'll carry my phone to everywhere' should be 'I carry my phone everywhere'. 'When I forgot' should be 'when I forget' to maintain present tense. 'Take what I need to do next' is unclear; 'see what I need to do next' is better.

× So I prefer make a list on my phone.

✓ So I prefer to make a list on my phone.

'Prefer make' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer to make'.