列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 중복된 단어 사용과 불명확한 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 불필요한 반복을 피하며, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

範例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I enjoy browsing and buying things spontaneously, especially at flea markets.

建議: 답변이 중복되고 불확실한 표현이 많습니다. 명확한 주제문을 제시하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며, 연결어를 사용해 논리적인 흐름을 만드세요.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks efficiently, so I can complete my work more easily and on time.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 명확한 문장 구조를 사용하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며, 연결어를 활용해 답변을 명료하게 만드세요.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to follow them, or they feel that making lists is unnecessary and time-consuming.

建議: 답변이 불완전하고 의미가 명확하지 않습니다. 선호하는 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 완성하여 자연스럽고 논리적으로 답변하세요.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful apps that make organizing tasks fun and convenient.

× No, I don't really make the list when I'm shopping because I I like shopping that flea flea shopping, like I like to buy something that I find it.

✓ No, I don't really make a list when I'm shopping because I like flea market shopping; I like to buy something that I find.

The phrase 'shopping that flea flea shopping' is unclear and redundant. 'Make the list' should be 'make a list' because it's a general statement. Also, 'that I find it' is incorrect; 'that I find' is sufficient. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct use of gerunds.

× No, I don't really make the list when I'm shopping because I I like shopping that flea flea shopping, like I like to buy something that I find it.

✓ No, I don't really make a list when I'm shopping because I like flea market shopping; I like to buy something that I find.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'list' when referring to lists in general. The indefinite article 'a' should be used instead.

× Umm, because some people can't follow the list even their make list and like to making list is some people that think it. Too.

✓ Umm, because some people can't follow the list even if they make one, and some people don't like making lists too.

The sentence has singular/plural confusion: 'their make list' should be 'they make one' or 'their lists'. Also, 'like to making list' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making lists'. The sentence structure is unclear and needs correction.

× Umm, because some people can't follow the list even their make list and like to making list is some people that think it. Too.

✓ Umm, because some people can't follow the list even if they make one, and some people don't like making lists too.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used instead of 'they'. Also, 'like to making list' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'don't like making lists'. Proper pronoun usage is necessary for clarity.

× I prefer paperless because there are many apps like many social results in fun. So if if I if I make a list in the phone, I yeah.

✓ I prefer paperless because there are many apps, like social apps, that are fun. So if I make a list on the phone, I do.

The phrase 'results in fun' is incorrect; it should be 'that are fun' or 'which are fun'. Also, the preposition 'in the phone' should be 'on the phone' when referring to using a phone as a device.