列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách khi đi mua sắm.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me buy everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

建議: Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng hơn về cách lập danh sách giúp bạn đạt mục tiêu công việc, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tưởng mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me achieve my goals and develop good habits. For example, when I plan my study schedule for math, I can manage my time effectively.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu trôi chảy hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do tại sao một số người không thích lập danh sách, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel lazy or unsure about how to organize their tasks. Also, they might not understand their strengths and weaknesses well enough to plan effectively.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy làm rõ ý và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích lý do bạn thích lập danh sách trên điện thoại hơn giấy.

範例: Honestly, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and portable. Additionally, my phone can send me notifications to remind me of important tasks.

× Definitely just setting a list is really significant for myself.

✓ Definitely, just setting a list is really significant for me.

The phrase 'for myself' is incorrect here; 'for me' is the appropriate pronoun. Also, 'setting a list' is acceptable but 'making a list' is more natural. However, the main issue is the pronoun usage, which falls under incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× Definitely just setting a list is really significant for myself.

✓ Definitely, just setting a list is really significant for me.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. Reflexive pronouns should be used when the subject and object are the same, which is not the case here. The correct pronoun is 'me'.

× The reason is because making a list not just helps me buy enough produce but also but also prevent me from attracting another good good.

✓ The reason is that making a list not only helps me buy enough produce but also prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

The sentence has redundancy ('but also but also') and incorrect verb form 'prevent' which should be 'prevents' to agree with singular subject 'making a list'. Also, 'attracting another good good' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence structure is faulty and needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× making a list not just helps me buy enough produce but also but also prevent me from attracting another good good.

✓ making a list not only helps me buy enough produce but also prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

The verb 'prevent' should be 'prevents' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. This is a third person singular verb agreement issue.

× Yes, I always make make a list for my work because it helps me complete all the target and ensures ensure a great habit.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me complete all the targets and ensures a great habit.

The verbs 'make make' and 'ensures ensure' are repeated erroneously. Also, 'target' should be plural 'targets' to match the context. The verb 'ensures' is correct for third person singular subject 'it'.

× because it helps me complete all the target and ensures ensure a great habit.

✓ because it helps me complete all the targets and ensures a great habit.

The word 'target' should be plural 'targets' because 'all the' indicates multiple items.

× For example, when I setting a schedule for having a good score at math, I need to.

✓ For example, when I set a schedule to get a good score in math, I need to.

The phrase 'when I setting' is incorrect; it should be 'when I set' (base verb form after 'when I'). Also, 'for having a good score at math' is awkward; 'to get a good score in math' is more natural.

× For example, when I setting a schedule for having a good score at math, I need to.

✓ For example, when I set a schedule to get a good score in math, I need to.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'math'; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'for having' is awkward; 'to get' is better.

× Several people nowadays don't want to make a list for many reasons.

✓ Several people nowadays don't want to make lists for many reasons.

The pronoun 'a list' is singular but 'several people' implies multiple lists. Using plural 'lists' is more appropriate here.

× The first one is they feel lazy and don't don't know how to make a list.

✓ The first one is that they feel lazy and don't know how to make a list.

The phrase 'don't don't' is a repetition error. Also, 'The first one is they feel lazy' is awkward; 'The first one is that they feel lazy' is better.

× The second reason is they don't know their strengths or weakness so they don't know how to make a list.

✓ The second reason is they don't know their strengths or weaknesses, so they don't know how to make a list.

The word 'weakness' should be plural 'weaknesses' to match 'strengths'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate clauses.

× To be honest, I will choose set a list on individual service than on paper for many reasons.

✓ To be honest, I will choose to set a list on an individual service rather than on paper for many reasons.

The phrase 'choose set' is incorrect; it should be 'choose to set'. Also, 'individual service' needs an article 'an'. 'Than' should be 'rather than' for comparison.

× The first one is electronic device is very convenient and can bring everywhere.

✓ The first one is that an electronic device is very convenient and can be brought everywhere.

The noun 'electronic device' needs the indefinite article 'an'. Also, 'can bring everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'can be brought everywhere' or 'can be carried everywhere'.

× The second reason is this device can give me some notification to remind me.

✓ The second reason is this device can give me some notifications to remind me.

The word 'notification' should be plural 'notifications' because devices usually send multiple alerts.