列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct sentence structures like 'I like shop' to 'I like shopping' and 'insists me' to 'insists that I'.

範例: No, I usually do not make lists because I have a sharp memory. However, my mom always insists that I carry a list when I go shopping.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear parts. Avoid repetition like 'make make always makes'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clearer examples. Also, try to be more specific about how lists help with work.

範例: Actually, I am a very lazy person, so I do not usually make lists for my work. However, I believe making lists is helpful because it helps you remember tasks and complete them on time. For example, a friend of mine always makes lists and is very organized.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains errors like 'make sleeves'. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid irrelevant words. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and provide specific details.

範例: I think some people do not like making lists because it takes a lot of time to plan every task. Therefore, they prefer to work without lists.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words properly and avoid awkward phrases like 'hang it in the table of mine'.

範例: I generally like to make lists on paper and hang them on my table because I can see the list whenever I need. However, making lists on my phone feels inconvenient to me.

× my mom always insists me to carry a list to the shop.

✓ my mom always insists that I carry a list to the shop.

The verb 'insist' is followed by 'that' plus a subject and base verb, not a direct object pronoun. So 'insists me to carry' is incorrect; it should be 'insists that I carry'. This is a common error in English grammar for Bangladeshi speakers.

× There is a friend of mine who make make always makes.

✓ There is a friend of mine who always makes them.

The subject 'friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Also, the phrase 'make make always makes' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'who always makes them'. This error is due to subject-verb agreement and redundancy.

× I think people do not like making lists because it takes a lot of time to make routine for every work it yeah, so I think some people do not make sleeves.

✓ I think people do not like making lists because it takes a lot of time to make a routine for every task, so I think some people do not make lists.

The sentence has incorrect words like 'sleeves' instead of 'lists' and awkward phrasing. 'Make routine for every work' should be 'make a routine for every task'. The quantifier 'a lot of time' is correct but the sentence structure and word choice need correction for clarity.

× I generally like to make lists on paper and hang it in the table of mine, because I can watch the list whenever I need,

✓ I generally like to make lists on paper and hang them on my table, because I can look at the list whenever I need,

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; it should be 'on' for 'hang on the table'. Also, 'watch' is not appropriate for reading lists; 'look at' is better. 'The table of mine' is awkward; 'my table' is correct.

× But in the if I make in the phone, it's somehow inconvenient to me.

✓ But if I make it on the phone, it's somehow inconvenient for me.

The phrase 'in the if' is incorrect; it should be 'if'. Also, 'make in the phone' should be 'make it on the phone'. The preposition 'to me' should be 'for me' to express inconvenience. These are common preposition and pronoun usage errors.