列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta efektif. Misalnya, gunakan 'shopping' sebagai kata kerja tanpa 'to' dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'efficient and effective'.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list organized by categories like vegetables, fruits, and household products. This helps me shop more efficiently and ensures I don't forget anything.

建議: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa, serta gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Misalnya, gunakan 'so that' untuk menjelaskan tujuan.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks. So that, I can prioritize them and stay focused throughout the day.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide dengan baik.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they already know what to do or they enjoy being spontaneous. They may feel that lists limit their freedom, and they prefer surprises and the excitement that comes with it.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kejelasan kalimat. Hindari kesalahan seperti 'if I found' dan 'forget bring'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan jelas.

範例: I prefer making my lists on paper, but sometimes it's inconvenient because if I forget my notebook, I lose track of my tasks. Therefore, I am open to switching to using my phone for lists.

× Yes, I make a list before I go shopping and I organize them by its categories such as vegetables, fruits and home products.

✓ Yes, I make a list before I go shopping and I organize it by its categories such as vegetables, fruits and home products.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because it refers to a plural noun, but 'a list' is singular. The correct pronoun should be 'it' to match the singular noun 'list'.

× I find it easier for me to shopping with a list so I can go more efficient and effective and not forget any.

✓ I find it easier for me to shop with a list so I can be more efficient and effective and not forget any.

After 'to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'to shopping' should be 'to shop'. Also, 'go more efficient and effective' is incorrect; it should be 'be more efficient and effective' to correctly use adjectives.

× Yes, I make A to do list for my work and it really works for me.

✓ Yes, I make a to-do list for my work and it really works for me.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun.

× I think some people done making this because they already know what they want to do or they just love being spontaneous.

✓ I think some people have done making this because they already know what they want to do or they just love being spontaneous.

The verb 'done' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Without 'have', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Maybe they thought having at least just limit their freedom and they prefer to have surprises and enjoy the excitement of it.

✓ Maybe they thought having a list at least just limits their freedom and they prefer to have surprises and enjoy the excitement of it.

The phrase 'having at least just limit' is incorrect. It should be 'having a list at least just limits' to correctly use the noun 'list' and the verb 'limits' agreeing with the singular subject.

× I prefer to make my list on my paper but sometimes I if I found it inconvenient because when I forget bring my notebook I will lose track of my task.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper but sometimes I find it inconvenient because when I forget to bring my notebook I lose track of my tasks.

The phrase 'sometimes I if I found' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'sometimes I find'. Also, 'forget bring' should be 'forget to bring' to correctly use the infinitive form. 'My task' should be plural 'my tasks' to match the context.

× So I am open to move to phone 2.

✓ So I am open to moving to my phone.

The phrase 'open to move' should be 'open to moving' because 'open to' is followed by a gerund. Also, 'phone 2' is unclear; 'my phone' is more appropriate in this context.