列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and avoid repeating similar points. For example, instead of saying "It's not messy, it's more time efficient," you can say "This way, it's not messy and also more time efficient." Also, try to add a specific example to make your answer more vivid.

範例: I always make a list when I go shopping because this way, it's not messy and also more time efficient. For instance, last week I made a list before going to the supermarket, so I quickly bought all the ingredients I needed for dinner without forgetting anything.

建議: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like "however" or "on the other hand" to contrast ideas. Also, be careful with grammar, for example, "sometimes" instead of "sometime" and "makes" instead of "make". Adding a specific example will strengthen your answer.

範例: It depends. Sometimes I make a list for my work; however, when I don't have time, I just go with the flow. But when I do make a list, it helps me organize tasks better and saves plenty of time. For example, last week I listed my tasks and finished them all efficiently.

建議: Try to be more specific and use clearer vocabulary. Instead of "making this," say "making lists." Also, use linking words like "because" and "for example" to explain your points clearly. Adding a concrete example will make your answer more effective.

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it requires effort to write and organize tasks. For example, I sometimes find it difficult to make lists myself, so I understand why others might avoid it.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence coherence by using linking words like "because" and "however." Also, avoid informal phrases like "and yeah." Try to provide a specific example to support your preference.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can check them immediately, which is more time efficient. However, with paper lists, I might lose them or forget where I put them. For instance, last month I lost my shopping list on paper, but my phone list was always with me.

× Sometime I make a list for my work and when I don't have time to actually make list I just go with the flow and do whatever.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work and when I don't have time to actually make a list I just go with the flow and do whatever.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). Also, 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article.

× ...which make the whole process more quicker and easier.

✓ ...which makes the whole process quicker and easier.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to a singular noun 'process', so the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular). Also, 'more quicker' is incorrect because 'quicker' is already a comparative form; 'more' is unnecessary.

× I think some people don't like making this because it actually needs a lot of effort put into writing a list and organizing things.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it actually needs a lot of effort put into writing a list and organizing things.

The pronoun 'this' is unclear and incorrect here; it should be replaced with 'lists' to refer clearly to the activity of making lists.

× While on paper I might lost the paper somewhere or cannot find it anymore, but on my phone it's saved in progress and yeah, it's easy.

✓ While on paper I might lose the paper somewhere or cannot find it anymore, but on my phone it's saved in progress and yeah, it's easy.

The verb 'lost' is past tense, but the modal 'might' requires the base form 'lose'. Also, 'saved in progress' is awkward but acceptable in informal speech.