列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时句子结构不够完整，且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，并且注意时态一致性。可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I need to buy many things because I have a poor memory and might forget some items. However, if I only need to buy one specific thing, I usually don't make a list.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, of course. When I have a lot of work to do, I have to make a list to remind myself so that I don't forget anything. It really works well for me.

建議: 回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱且有语法错误。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体理由支持，使用恰当的词汇和句子结构。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. Also, they may prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的代词和句子结构，避免模糊表达，并且使句子更连贯。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier to access and check them anytime. However, some people might prefer using paper lists because they find it more tangible and easier to write on.

× But if I just need to buy a specific thing. I didn't.

✓ But if I just need to buy a specific thing, I don't.

这里句子时态不一致，前半句是现在时，后半句用过去时“didn't”不合适，应使用现在时“don't”。建议保持时态一致。

× Yes of course when when I have a lot of work need to do, I had to make a list to remind me don't to forget.

✓ Yes of course when I have a lot of work to do, I have to make a list to remind me not to forget.

句中“need to do”缺少不定式“to”，且“had to”应改为现在时“have to”，因为描述的是习惯行为。"don't to forget"结构错误，应为"not to forget"。

× Yes it work.

✓ Yes, it works.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“works”。

× Because making this can help the air find it easier to do a lot of things like what things they need to do and you can make a plan and find some free time.

✓ Because making this can help people find it easier to do a lot of things, like what they need to do, and you can make a plan and find some free time.

句中“the air”用词错误，应为“people”或“others”，代词使用不当导致句意不清。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to see and they can check it anytime, but I think for some people maybe they prefer to make it to other people paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier to see and I can check it anytime, but I think some people may prefer to make it on paper.

句中“they can check it”指代不明，应改为“I can check it”。“make it to other people paper”表达错误，应为“make it on paper”。