列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to combine short sentences to make your speech more natural and fluent. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to use simple and correct sentences. Explain clearly how making a list helps you at work, and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and avoid mistakes. Writing them down in a notebook makes it easier to prepare and stay organised.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear reason why some people dislike making lists, using simple and correct English.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their mind. They feel that writing lists is unnecessary or takes too much time.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please clearly state your preference and explain why, using simple and correct sentences.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me wherever I go. This way, I can easily check my list anytime.

× For example, when I shop for groceries.

✓ For example, when I shop for groceries, I use a list.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb or complete thought. Adding a main clause completes the sentence structure.

× Yes, it's very good when you make a list during the world because it can prevent you from forgetting something, a mistake.

✓ Yes, it's very good when you make a list during work because it can prevent you from forgetting something or making a mistake.

The preposition 'during the world' is incorrect; it should be 'during work'. Also, the phrase 'forgetting something, a mistake' is unclear and corrected to 'forgetting something or making a mistake' for clarity.

× And when you nodded into the handheld book, it made you.

✓ And when you note things in the handheld book, it helps you.

The phrase 'nodded into the handheld book' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'note things in the handheld book' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'it made you' is incomplete and corrected to 'it helps you'.

× It makes you easy to be prepared.

✓ It makes it easy for you to be prepared.

The original sentence lacks the necessary structure. Adding 'it' and 'for you' clarifies the subject and object, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× The reason why people don't like making noise is because in their way, they prefer something mental and they use their brand to reach up to catch up your resolution, your equipment, your work and something else.

✓ The reason why people don't like making lists is that they prefer to use their memory to keep track of their goals, tasks, work, and other things.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear phrases like 'making noise' instead of 'making lists', and 'use their brand' which is incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects pronoun usage.

× What I prefer to use to make a list is exactly on because I always bring along with my hand whenever I go.

✓ What I prefer to use to make a list is my phone because I always carry it with me wherever I go.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing like 'exactly on' and 'bring along with my hand'. The correction uses proper pronouns and clearer expressions.